This is so cute!

THIS TRAGIC STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Your parallels to the original Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Anderson was such a beautiful nod to his story. I loved the fable reversals where the male suitor dies for the female character this time. Suck it Grimm Brothers a new fairytale writer is in town!

YES! I love this take! People always killing off Uma in their fics but this was reversed yesssss

Oh my god. This made me sob big big tears

Harry dying make my soul feel full

Harry baby what is you doin!

I loved this! Finally a Harry prime story!

This is it. The most tragic fic I've ever read. Well done.

wow...poor Uma...great job

Nooooooooooooooo! It can't end like this! (Goes to cry in the corner.) It was written very well even if it was painful.

NSJJWGDHWJSHSJBSBS IIII LLLLOOOOOVVVEEEE IIIITTT! It also made me cry bc I mean WHAT THE HECK UMA JUST KILLED HER SOULMATE?! But at the same time Harry and Uma were soulmates soooo yay! Still sucks hes dead. Great fic! Very well done!

I love the idea of Harry and Uma being long lost friends. Uma remembers only after she casts the spell and then the feeling of guilt she has just makes the scene even more tense. This is great pls continue. Also, is Harry dead or is he alive and he just passed out or something?

Very interesting AU. So sad about Harry tough... please continue this!