Damn, these characters are just right. Feisty, proud May, been-to-therapy genius billionaire playboy philanthropist. Scrappy Steve from Brooklyn. And Pete, the part-time hero and full time teenager. I love it all.

Sometimes, I stumble through a scene change; it's not always clear when time skips ahead or it's a new room and group of people, and that jolts me from the story for a moment. But the plot and pacing are always good, and your endings always circle back (neatly and naturally) to the opening theme.

Thanks for sharing!

nice!

Another great story! Was amused by the mentions of May's past attempts to bake. Felt bad for her and Peter when their apartment burned. Really glad they got out and weren't too badly hurt, and loved how Tony let them stay at the tower while they recovered and looked for a new place. Thought it was funny when May made Steve apologise to Peter for the black eye from Germany. Loved how, even though Peter and May were struggling to feel better about their new situation, they knew they'd recover and be okay eventually.

:)

I really need to go to sleep but your stories are so addicting and good. I'm so relieved nobody died especially the chihuahuas. Yeah, I'm a sucker for animals. Poor Peter and May but they'll be ok, they will definitely be ok.

I love it!

Thank you for sharing it!

(In these moment I'd like to be able to write or "speak" better in english so I could tell you how much I like it and why... But I don't... So... Thank you for this)

This is great!

Oh, I love that she made Steve apologise! No one can stand against the badassery of May Parker lol, not even Captain America xD

And how Tony enjoyed it lmao... You really have the characters perfect!

I love May!
As hilarious as ever. . .

I love Aunt May and peters relationship! You wrote it so well!

brilliant

“But how stubborn is she... on a scale of Happy to Thor’s Hammer, how likely am I to get my way with your aunt?” Oh my god.D A scale of Happy to Thor’s Hammer! That is probably the funniest thing I have read in a fanfic maybe ever. I’m dying.

Poor Peter and May. To funny her telling Steve off.

Oh my god I’m seriously loving the way you’re writing the kid and his (extended) family!
May and Tony getting head to toe is such a head canon for me. Her not wanting to take advantage of his money and feeling guilty for everything she’s letting him buy and him literally being a billionaire who wants to support them because it doesn’t hurt him and he likes them and wants them to have the best.. also he’s probably terrified of her
Loved it :)

after the fire I am stuck with the idea of happy and may getting together as a couple.