I love the title, it was grand this poem was beautifully planned. Luan is my favorite Loud sibling of them all, it's never a dull moment when she's around that crazy house hall. ;)

I wish you did more this. What I mean by that is that I like the lyrics, but it feels empty. Like maybe you should put in some ‘action’ between the verses.

OmG, I LOVED this! I love Hamilton!

The writing is amazing, keep up the great work!