Reviews for Hey, Captain A-hole, Can you Friend me on Facebook? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Looooooollll amazing 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this story! Love reading about Tony and May becoming co-parents to Peter. Can definitely see Tony grounding him like that. Enjoyed Peter's interactions with Steve and Sam (as well as Ned's fanboying around Steve). Good that the mission was a success, despite the injuries. Enjoyed the conversation between Tony and Peter towards the end. Was amused by Tony putting Steve's contact into Peter's phone under the name Captain Asshole. :) |
![]() ![]() I am photoshoping the contact image for cap into a real picture |
![]() ![]() ![]() How have I never seen this story before? I laughed, I cringed, I laughed some more then I laughed once more. Peter is such a little shit but he does have a great mentor to blame for that. Poor kid, he's gonna get in a lot more trouble if he keeps that up. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAH! What a note to end on! Hilarious! But seriously, this was another great story! I'm really loving how you're writing Tony and Peter's relationship. That little bit about Tony caring about only a few people was simple yet brutal and very nicely done. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahaha I'm binge-reading your Avengers fics and they're all so awesome! Loved what Tony did to Steve's contact, it was such a Tony thing to do lol xD (And yes, I know Endgame exists, I'm not even in denial anymore like I was the first two weeks, I just need some light back in my life after that black hole of an ending... sigh) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I should be asleep right now. Instead i'm loving this. thank you so much for sharing it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice once more. Liked the Captain Asshole part |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really well written. I enjoyed the humour and your characters were spot on. I love the father and son dynamic. Poor Pete was stuck between a rock and a hard place. I hope Cap gets the kid a reprieve from his grounding. Tony is awesome as Irondad. Good JOB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hell...you did a good job with Tony's one liners XD I love it. This story deserves much more attention. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, what a joy this was to read. I wasn't expecting it from the summary or first paragraph! This had so much going on in a short time without feeling rushed and I just loved it. The whole mission with Steve and Sam was gold and had me worrying for Pete the whole time. The reveal that the reason Sam and Steve were acting seedy was because Tony told them not to involve Pete... gorgeous. Loved it. Also was a fan of the whole "loopwhole bullshiy/ burning the suit" lines; the humor in the story in the one liners are great, especially with your descriptions. I'm glad I found this! It definitely deserves more reviews. Nice job! hope |
![]() ![]() Uh. Hi? I have an acc - Fxreflies - but of course I'm not logged in. It never let's me on mobile. Anyways, thsts not gonna stop me from reviewing and telling you how great your story is. Maybe I'm a few months late to the party, but hey? I'm just glad I actuslly found this story. You had the characters spot on. All of that suspense sprinkled throughout the story really had me going. Ooh, and those one liners when Peter was in the building were fantastic. Really kept the story moving. The plot was reall well made, too. Everything made sense and I was looking forward to reading the next paragraph. Overall, this was an excellent story. I reall hope I come across more of your work. |