Mario Kart 8 is a fun time and made for a humorous chapter. To be honest I'd be satisfied reading your writing about these 5 playing any games really, specifically D and D again. Or just talking amongst themselves, everyone's just so entertaining.

I didn't mention it before but Connor and North's interactions are sweet, they make me smile so.

Markus really can't keep it together around Connor in a relaxed environment, lmao. The "toss your controller in the air and catch it" trick to show off was too much and I laughed too hard at it.

Him, Simon and Josh all choking at the start of the first race was hilarious. Simon and Josh being almost consistently bad was amazing.

I'm really glad I found this story!

Oh my God, that Dungeons and Dragons game should've went on longer. I would read an entire chapter on it. (I lost it when Markus lost 4 HP from the Goblin King having his way with him.)

This lighthearted parts of this chapter were quite delightful and the talk at the end was so sweet.

Oh yeah, also I'm finding this case so intriguing. And all the victims continue to suck balls so I guess I don't have to feel bad for any of them, lol. Not at all, they're the worst. Poor Conner though once again dealing with the depravity of it all. Not just from the sick acts committed by the victims but also the gruesome crime scenes.

Aw, Hank is such a good dad suffering on a couch so Connor can feel better. This chapter already had me laughing right from the start, good job with the humor.

Lmao, "The World's Most Awkward Android Flirting, starring Connor and Markus: When Will My Strange Artificial Child Realise He's in Love with Metal Jesus?". I'd watch that.

Connor was being adorable as usual. His highlights this chapter including the nervous miming, the giggling, "My spoon!", showing off his succulent and moping when Markus isn't around. There was obviously more but I'll stop here.

"Scintillating". (My mind immediately went "wtf?" At least I learned a new word today!)

Markus is such a lovesick dope. Lol, I love it.

And the bonding is so sweet too! I love this story so much.

Also, I forgot to add that the end of this chapter is just too damn precious. I feel so bad for Conner seeing some of the horrors humans can create. It reminds me of when I first started learning about truly evil/bad people in the world.

Him being comforted by Hank and Sumo is just the cutest way to end the chapter. It made me feel so cozy.

So, yeah, fuck Samuel. I wasn't expecting all of the victims so far to be assholes/bastards. If it turns out that this is just vigilante justice then I'm not too bothered, lol.

The beginning of this chapter was so fun and lighthearted before it got dark. The comeback part was hilarious and Markus and Conner were cute again. I love how North, Josh, Simon and even Hank are on board with Markus and Conner liking each other, it makes this even cuter!

I'm glad your goblin brain got obsessed with D: BH. This story is already great from the first chapter. It's funny and cute, and Markus is being so adorable! I love the character interactions too. Can't wait to read the rest.

I would love to see a server where everyone can cheer at these idiots in love. Also this story is just so amazing and I love it so much

This entire fanfic is just one big constant mood and I love it.

I love this story. I have a flight tomorrow and I have nothing ready and I still insisted on reading every single chapter in one go. I love it, have I mentioned that already? Anyway. I love it. Yeah, that. (I seem to also have forgotten how to speak/write in English. Oh, joy.)

Please update soon!

Damn you. I really hate the rating T now. Loved the story though, the writing was perfection and I just wanted to give Connor hugs the entire time.

I loved this story so much! Great job, especially with the emotions talk at the end. I have never seen anybody go as deep about Markus's relationship with Jericrew and I think it all works perfectly.
I'm off to read more of your DBH fics then!

I LOVE this fanfic and wish it had not ended sence Conner X Markus is kinda rare! Love this fanfic and PLEASE do more Conner X Markus! I love those fanfics!

I've read the entire story at least three times since you posted the final chapter, but I'm STILL having difficulties putting my thoughts and feelings into words. Well, coherent words, at least. Here's some disjointed words. Feels. Hot, way too freaking hot. Hurray. Finally. My favorite boys. So gay. I'm so gay. I love them. Best ending ever.