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Angel-Chan234 chapter 2 . 8/2/2018 ) |
ChaoticBox chapter 2 . 7/6/2018 ok, I am dying over how realistic this can be. Shiho being embarrassed and not wanting to address what happened is very much her omg she would totally cherish these little interactions. also, the kids watching in silence is so cute I loved it. |
littlelinguistme chapter 2 . 7/3/2018 ALSO this si NOT a cop out. So good. So SO SOSO good you owe not a single person a single thing. You did all the fics on time and they're all sooooo good. we're all dying over at discord In other news, a continuation! Im obsessed with how ayu and mitsu are glaring at genta for sneezing and ruining their major cute cute moment. i adore the detective boys. Again, dialogue is to dIE for. the banter rhythm you have is sooo well executed. im always impressed and amazed how clever/witty you are. kudos kudos x10000 but its warm inside. KILL ME AGAIN WHY DONTCHA it was already cute all the way through but that one more last line i justls;kadjf ;alskdf |
littlelinguistme chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 oh my god i remember this fic. i think it was the first fic i read by you. i was indeed confused but shy lolol but also i remember how I wasn't thaaat confused i still was able to piece together the plot and reading this now, yes it is much clearer and MUCH more emotional for me. What a rollercoaster, i mean, i panicked right along with shin when he thought she, gun in hand, would ... i mean the implication that she introduced herself to him, sort of restarted their relationship, it seriously seriously felt like she was reducing herself to a mere criminal, with none of their history, after all they'd been through. Devastating. i was devastated with him. And then she wasn't. the plot twisted in a direction i most certainly did nOT expect, and i loooove it wowowowow (see the trend? Me your fics death). Something i really like about your writing that i've thoguht mine always lacked is your easygoing way with words and how you're able to say SO MUCh in so little. these ficlets are so short and sososo powerful with feelings all up in everywhere. im obsessed with actual sherlock holmes and the quote killed me. 3 |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2018 Cuteeee |
furr chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 they are cute! i love honest shiho3 |
furr chapter 2 . 6/30/2018 they are cuteee! I love honest shiho3 |
fans chapter 2 . 6/29/2018 i hope you cotinue this story |
Distorted Domain chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 I love how you keep them in character and their interactions feel like something they'd actually do in the anime. In most other CoAi stories, both seem out of character and unrealistic things happen too quickly. Well done on this one! |