Reviews for Breaking Monotony
billyjbradshaw chapter 20 . 8/18
This was an emotional rollercoaster! But I’m so glad Serena found that she was more than just a mom.
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billyjbradshaw chapter 15 . 8/18
Ohhh NO! I don’t know how this ends, but...in most cases this is BAD! If they others find out, they’ll say she slept her way in. Her reputation will be ruined. I hope it doesn’t but...I’m so worried.
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billyjbradshaw chapter 9 . 8/18
HAVE YOU PEERED INTO MY LIFE?! It’s a bit unnerving how much of these scenes I’ve actually been through. Not the Darien bits. Just Serena. Her thoughts. The things she’s going through. I want to hug her. It got so much better for me (reconciled and now stronger than ever). I hope it gets better for her too except with Darien.
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billyjbradshaw chapter 8 . 8/18
It hurts-how much I relate to this. Thankfully, I fought enough for both my husband and I. Leaving was out of the question. I’m a firm believer in marriage. There are no ‘outs.’
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billyjbradshaw chapter 5 . 8/18
I cried...because I had that almost exact conversation with my husband about my hair. It hurt so bad. You leave feeling beautiful and the guy you wanted to look good for— I feel for Serena. So so so much.
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Godschildtweety chapter 20 . 7/29
Really good
ArtsyFartsyAlcoholic chapter 1 . 7/4
This was such a great read, I thoroughly enjoyed every moment. Your writing is fantastic and the story was *12 chef kisses*. I would love to see continuation of the relationship between Serena, Darien, and her family!
breaker99 chapter 20 . 6/23
I really like this story. It’s a different twist for sailor moon Fiction about a older woman who is really just taking that next stage of her life with two kids .
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
Beautifully written! I love this story! Such a genuine and emotional story thank you for this! I hope you continue writing3
Guest chapter 20 . 4/11
I love the story... I love how realistic it is
Roxypockets1 chapter 20 . 3/15
Oh my goodness, I can’t believe it’s over, this is such a light hearted and hopeful, empowering ending. Thank you so much for writing this, there have been many days we’re I’ve related to Serena’s feelings and I hope I can make the same progress your Serena has. I wouldn’t m if life threw me a Darien too. But really, this story has been there for me in so many sad moments, thank you.
Roxypockets1 chapter 18 . 3/14
I’m late to the party but damn. The feels. And Darien’s determination. Yesssss.
SailorMoon489 chapter 20 . 3/11
I'm actually sad that this story is now completed but its such a beautiful story of growth and strength. I'm definitely adding it to my go-to list for when I'm in need for a good story to read. I enjoyed reading every update. Thank you so much for writing a story like this.
judeohchop chapter 20 . 3/9
I LOVED this story, every step of the way, and I’m so grateful that you finished it. I read these last few chapters with such a smile on my face at a few moments. You really created a different version of Serena that I haven’t seen before and she was wonderful—and so was Darien. (I also loved Alex and Elsie!) I love the conclusion Serena came to about Seiya not trusting her enough to be honest when they were going through similar things. Just wonderful. Is it weird that I feel proud? I’ve never finished a story before and it’s such an accomplishment. Hope you keep writing.
phillynz chapter 20 . 3/9
So are her and darien a item. Im glad she got her apology
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