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Great story so far! Loved it! Please keep updating. I'm definitely see your other fics

Hinata for the win please

Wow seriously, you're going to trash talk this story under a guest account? This is honestly a great story, don't hate on something, that someone's dedicated hours and hours one for us.

In all honesty, this is definitely an interesting twist to the normal naruto arc and it's refreshing to see a naruto with different teammates other than the rookies and the characters are well formulated. My only complaint is the time skips can be a bit hectic to readjust to the atmosphere. Still, one of the great NarutoxYugao fics and you've done a great job incorporating other characters such as Hana in as well. Very realistic Anbu scenes and I'm extremely excited for your next update!

Another pointless and boring as fuck chapter. Naruto as a teacher is pointless and boring. Go fuck your self with a rusty knife for wasting my time.

Waste of time reading this chapter. All of it was pointless and useless to the plot. Get back on track and stop wasting everyone’s time with stupid shit.

And the author gets even more fucking retarded. It’s no wonder he quit writing. I’m sure he’s had his nose rubbed in his own shit enough times he must have learned better than to keep writing this garbage.

Fuck you im out. I hate stupid authors.

Why the hell did people vote for this stupid bitch. Why is there a need for a relationship at his age anyway. It’s fucking retarded. I really just want this bitch gone. She’s fucking stupid and doesn’t treat Naruto well at all. I don’t know why people think abusing each other and saying hurtful things is a form of flirting. I’ve had a few females try to treat me like that. I call them a bitch to their face and tell them off for their behavior. If it doesn’t change, not only will I not return any affections, they aren’t even worth being friends with. Friends are supposed to support and care for each other. Bullying and tearing someone down are not the marks of friendship. That’s you being an asshole knowing they probably won’t kill you for it. But that’s also taking advantage of your so called friend. Naruto is way too forgiving he’s not Jesus. It’s beyond retarded to expect readers to swallow this behavior. Nobody gets abused like him, and does what he does. He’s obviously not human since this character is incapable of having genuine human reactions.

See this is dumb. In Naruto, the villages are military dictatorships. Everyone knows what a threat Danzo is. He has also not followed orders. So why hasn’t he been punished? This proves that the leader is a spineless jellyfish that lets others walk all over him. He has the power, authority, and right to take action and doesn’t. He is not fucking worthy of respect. The man is an unmitigated coward.

Yep. Jiraya is a scumbag who should be demoted to Genin rank. His services to the village are never detailed beyond running a spy network. But it’s also complete and utter bullshit that this lying stealing child neglecting asshole hasn’t even tried to see Naruto. Naruto is a fucking pussy who is forgiving people who should not be forgiven. Especially as those people have done nothing to show remorse or done anything to earn forgiveness. Naruto needs to punch Jiraya in the face and go back to Konoha. Him and Tsunade can go fuck each other with rusty knives for being completely useless.

Well this is certainly an enjoyable story so far it will be interesting to see where you take it from here

why not let Naruto get his dad and mom home and his others clan home too when he mix and part them too and when working as spy and hit men too like took out a rice lord out and his army too ,like gen ford tom out and when then move into the back of ninjas not seeing it the red lights and he keep a cub size home for under cover jobs and when in the home Naruto keep a under floor black lock money bags now 12 of them now , his code name is Dragon raven ,when working vs others too, when took out a mob boss and get the money gold then he had it used to pay for a land he get to put it to the back of his house now, a office he was used now , gym now, too , when he had living in it now,

When’s the next chapter all I have to say.

are you going to hive naruto mangekyou sharingan