Your writing skills are amazing! I enjoyed this so much. By the way loved your way of how the lyrics to un poco loco were created. Please can you continue? It's just so good and the cliffhanger is killing me. Just as Imelda and Hector were to be reunited T.T( even tho not forever)

Really? You left it here? GOSH it was perfect!

I love this concept! I've thought about it briefly myself, but never fleshed it out. You picked a great suspenseful place to stop updating LOL!

LOVE IT!

Please continue this! I need to know what happens! I love your Imelda and Hector in this story and I need to know how things work out in the end. Does she find out that he tried to come home? Does she put his photo up on the ofrenda? Is Coco allowed to music once again? These are important questions that need solved!

Can't wait! ~DL14

I love this chapter. I have to go to work soon and don't have time to write much. But keep up the good work. This fic is amazing.

that flashback was so romantic!

The suspense is starting to kill me. I loved the flashback to when they first met. Every little bit of it just screamed that’s exactly how it happened. I’ll be excitedly wait I gotta to see how the rest of this plays out (assuming I don’t die from the cuteness or suspense).

I really loved this chapter. Reading about how they met was really sweet. Also reading about Imelda's heartache and how much she missed Hector. It's so good! The part that really touched me, *She runs her fingertips along the photo as her heart creeps up into her throat. The feeling is nearly suffocating. Her eyes blur with tears as her fingers rest upon his face, and for a moment she tries to remember what it felt like to touch him*
I felt that. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more(:

omg more please! I want to see what happens when Hector and Imelda reunite!

I hope you continue this! Can’t wait for another update !

Normally I’d sign in to review, but it’s late and I’m feeling lazy. So... Well anyways on to the actual review. This is pretty well written. I definitely am interested in seeing how the story continues to progress. The only criticism I have is that I’m not sure that they go through the final death even if they are remembered. I was under the impression that it only happened to those who were forgotten (which would eventually happen to anyone, especially if their stories had to be passed down directly from each person). That is of course how I understand it to work, but I could be completely wrong.

This is a great idea. A freaking awesome and original idea. I would love to see Hector visit Imelda in a dream. You're very creative. Keep going(:

This is amazing already - please continue! 3 I want to see what happens next! Beautiful writing, btw!