I want her to join Jim.

I was laughing almost the entire time I read!

I really need to know what's going to happen next! This was so good! I love how you put all the characters together and their personalities. I really hope you haven't abandoned this lovely story. I love how you make your chapters supper long as well.

This is SO GOOD! I can't wait to read more.
Although, I do have to admit I would like a but more Jim and human contact.

Omg he was shot?! Poor Jim. I’m absolutely loving this story!

I just... I have no words. This chapter danced across some really funny and interesting concepts, but also dove into some really deep emotions. All the scenes with Jim, Claire and others from the group going through this adventure of a cross country hiking trip is really fun and I have been really enjoying getting a laugh from them. I think that this mysterious hunter that is following them gives a thrilling dash of mystery to this story in a really fun way. And Jim getting shot was a HUGE deal. I would really like to see some more instances where Jim runs into humans along their journey, and wouldn't mind seeing both good and bad reactions from said humans. This is a fantastic story and I really look forward to your next update! Hope to hear from you soon!

Jim finally won a spar against Nomura!

The "fast food is still edible to trolls" scene was funny and cute.

I find myself thinking 'werewolf' or 'Changeling', or possibly some varient of 'vampire', for the hunter stalking the group. Mr Snufflebutter sounds cute.

I feel so bad for Jim over that encounter with the campers.

Now even more questions are raised over who the huntress' identity is.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Okay, so a new evil threat is going to face our Trollhunters. I feel so sorry for them.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

I'm glad to find out that you're a TH fan. -

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Interesting. I was expecting this dtory to be more the lines of a emotional rollercoaster, without a clear antagonist. I’m eager to see what you have planned for it.

Also, I noticed you wrote “willalways” together.

Keep up the great writing :)

This story is amazing and really well written. I am really interested to see who the mystery hunters at the end are and I really enjoyed how you present the characters. You did a fantastic job on this and I look forward to your next update, keep up the good work!

This chapter so was so funny. I loved it. And I can’t wait to see who these bad guys are.

In Toby and Jim's talk, about body image issues, the bit about Toby's nickname in his old town was a nice reference to the book the series was based on, if that was deliberate. Toby calling Jim a "champion overachiever" for being the one who's changed the most in the past year was fun.

Of course Nomura took over Jim's training. It was an entertaining literary trick, saying the force of impact when she knocked him from the tree could be described with a keyboard smash and then typing said smash. The two of them remembering Draal even though they don't directly speak of him was moving.

Spiny-tailed migratory fire cats verses global warming: I know from the end of the fic that it was actually a conspiracy by someone trying to test and possibly drive apart the Trollmarket refugees and Trollhunter team, but I still want that nature documentary.

As soon as Jim admitted he ate the bug, my mind went "primate social grooming behaviour." Steve was a useful contributor to that discussion. Barbara made the right decision turning it into a group chat. Merlin, on the other hand, continues to contribute very little.

Jim's domestic fantasy of stuff he's seen couples do on TV and in old movies was cute.

"A human-troll hybrid and a gorgon walk into a bar. That's not a joke, it's just date night."

Heh. Butt-hand. And possible 'Finding Nemo' reference.

It's nice that the spy lady feels sympathy for them. I wonder what leverage or reward her employer is holding over her. She seems a lot more practical than her boss, pointing out that internal struggle is more effective at dividing a group than an external threat they can just rally against.

Very nice start. I think you wrote Claire and Jim very accurately :)