| Reviews for Feel Like I'm Drowning |
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Natters chapter 5 . 10/15/2019 Good fic |
Franxine bobo chapter 5 . 10/11/2018 I like how Walter was hesitant about starting up again because he didn't want her doing this every time she felt useless that's what I liked about runaway Walter because he refused to take all the blame loved how he told them about themselves |
vivix8 chapter 5 . 8/13/2018 Awwwww it's wonderful¡ I love your fic, I expect anxious the conclusion¡ Youre keeping calm in my broken heart after of terrible final of the serie¡ I LOVE WAIGE¡ |
Margaret Gautier chapter 5 . 7/30/2018 I loved this well written story. Thank you for opening the doors for them. For them to acknowledge their love for one another was beautiful. I"'ve been reading conflict of parallels, by Building paramyds,they are married and waiting or their baby. This put Puts me at piece. Thank you . |
Bna1001 chapter 5 . 7/30/2018 Ok so I'm surprised at how much this ending made sense, this story was on the shorter side of what I've been reading lately but you've put as much angst and thrill into it and I love that. The reconciliation worked out well and I liked the part about having a foot out of the door. Their seriousness and maturity about each other shows through. Nice! |
ScorplinginTraining chapter 5 . 7/29/2018 I've been outta town and unplugged for a few days. But I'm baaaack now and in read/review mode once again. I loved the team reconciliation. I knew Sly wouldn't hold a grudge. I was so happy to hear everyone admit fault and all the blame being shared. I thought the little Fly moment was sweet. THANK YOU for Toby acknowledging what Walt has done for them. I was like yaaassss! And ahhhhh! The best for last! I'm actually so glad Walter balked at first. Paige isn't the only one who's been hurt. Hell, Wally's own parents distanced themselves from him. So I am glad he said what he needed to say even though his knee jerk first impulse was to say YES! Another fantastic story! Thank you! |
Joan123 chapter 5 . 7/29/2018 Yes, thank you for bringing Walter and Paige together and for doing it in such a cinvincing fashion! I'm curious to see how they resolve the Scirpion-Centipede issue. Wonderful story and beautiful writing! |
WeBuiltThePyramids chapter 5 . 7/28/2018 Ughhh all the feels. I've been writing a lot lately, and in the past few days it seems like all the readers have just vanished, which really sucked my inspiration right out of me tonight - so it was really, really good to have something to read, something without any pressure, and something with expectations that I knew would be realized. This was such a great fic, and such a, in the end, simple fix. I like that. I maintain that they COULD have fixed things in one episode, which is what is keeping me going right now. None of what happened in that finale was completely black and white irreversible. All we needed - and what we probably were gonna end up getting - was some near death experience to make them all realize what idiots they are. All of them. |
pamz chapter 5 . 7/28/2018 Real talk happening in this chapter. The air is all nice and clear now. I like how everyone admitted their part in the clusterduck that tore the team apart. And the reconciliation between Waige - just perfect. Thanks for sharing this wonderful fix-it fic. I've really enjoyed reading it. |
Marie chapter 5 . 7/28/2018 Really good and sweet chapter Walter is scared we can see why but he is trying Thank you for your great story |
Bna1001 chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 Aww it broke my heart when Walter thought that nothing she had said would mean anything if she couldn’t be saved. Literally the opposite of what Paige would want, but still. Yikes you scared me for a good second when Walter asked about long term effects. Phew she’ll get better. Liked the angst, thrill-packed story that this was, extremely well developed. |
Rainbow Stevie chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 *nonstop heart eyes* |
MetalKyria chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 Aawww! Thank you so much for this Waige moment. Unusual to hear Paige speak "the last words". sweet how Walter reacted. |
WeBuiltThePyramids chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 was gonna wait to read this until I updated something as a personal reward but then I decided you know what? The show is over. This is all we have left. I want to read this and that's all the reason I need right now. Treat yo'self, Nicole. I love this idea of her saying this as she thinks she is dying - because her last emotional plea to him, the last time she said "I love you" was when she thought that he was dying. I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes. |
dcd28 chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 Great chapter in a great story. Thank you. |