More please update soon please

I see what you did here, and all i have to say is...why WHY why whY WHY!?
Was transplanting the kids from loud house really part of the request? -_-

Hey update about the pairings idea:
I remembered that Luna is actually Bi on the louds Canon verse so you could either do as I sugested before or have her paired with Tom and Lonnie paried with Oskar, thus leaving Jackie for Lynn... Or you could have Luna with Oskar (although I would really prefer for Oskar to not be with her because Luna is awesome and Oskar is just... Meh plus I think he is more similar to Bobby than Tom anyways so there is that).
That said please update this soon

HNNNNNNN. NEED. UPDATE. SOON. OR WILL. EXPLODE. THIS STORY IS THAT GOOD.

Update plz~

Kyaaaaaaah this is not a should never be a one-shot! And you know want ideas? Is shall give you some:

Marco needs to solve his newfound lack of autoriity over the kids so I was thinking that he could either :
a megaphone and use it everytime there is a fight .
Lisa to Build a Portable voice modifier
Star do a spell to temporarily change his voice every time there is a fight.

People the markapoo kids need to meet:

Ponnyhead

Tom

Jackie Lynn Thomas

Oscar

Janna

Eclipsa

So i think you could follow the events of the canonverse of Star vs the Forces of evil making a few modifications to include the Diaz sibblings, only it would be Lincon going to Mewnie to become a knight instead of Marco and one of the sisters would acompannny Star to Tom's demoncism becoming his girlfriend instead of Star ,thus making it so the horrible Booth episode never happens.

Instead of that episode, I think the Diaz family should be visited by Star and Lincon one day and go dimension hopping, only to at some point land on the dimension where the canonverse of the loud house takes place and go out to going out to explore each of them meet individually with friends of the louds who mistake them for each loud at first glance:

Roni Ann akwardly going behind who she thinks is her BF to pull his underwear.

Bob kissing a girl he thinks is his GF

Sam inviting a girl she thinks is her GF to a date

Etc.

Only for the real louds to appear at some point alongarde the people who came with the Diaz to clarify the situation, then they would have go to the loud's house and share some stories.

Ideas for romantic parings on this:

Linconstar (I simply adore the idea of him crushing on her and since Marco himself is now oficcialy off the market, I think his son should take his place and become Star's new Love interest)

Tomori (Lori Loud has a BF so why shouldn't Lori Diaz have one too? Her and Tom would be a perfect match in my opinion )

Larkie (Luna and Jackie Lynn Thomas. The Apple never Falls to far from the tree and Luna is alredy lesbian in the Louds so why not use this to your favor ?)

As for the rest you can decide for your self .

But seriously this idea is awesome and it should not be classified as a mere one-shot : it is compleatly perfect for a long fict that I garantee will be a compleate sucess

Glosseryck Grampa was hilariously.

"Hey stupid. I think your being stupid again." Hahaha that cracked me up. It felt so real from her.

You can add the story plots for both shows into the chapters.

Nice crossover but you really should label it so it shows up with the loud house crossovers

Ah, Rhombulus. You fucking idiot. Love this chapter. I hope Marco tells everyone about his kids before it makes things worse.

I am looking forward to chapter 6 and I hope Star Butterfly summons Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze.

Awesome and brilliant chapter. I'm loving this entire idea more and more as it develops. :)

I love it. Plz update soon.