Why Raye why. The church is always the first place for finding the survivors! And you left it for last!Your stupidity ad make more suffering for sister Verity

love the story, i hope you update soon.

I wonder when we'll see Noire

could not comment cause the last change was just a updated chapter and cant comment twice.
anyway im glad you changed your mind about killing off Yana.
Hope to see more of this story.

love the story so far,only questions i have are when will tharja and raye become couple and i hope you update soon:)

Alright this chapter was pretty damn hype. I'm super excited to see how these characters will interact with the shepards and I'm even more excited to see some of elibe's eight legends here because they're never really talked about. I wonder how tiki will react to seeing "Mar-Mar" again? That's probably gonna be cute lol. I wasn't expecting Yana to get rescued this chapter but with all those reinforcements it makes perfect sense. Walhart better watch out lol. Can't wait for next time!

Wow. I really didn't expect Yana to die. I thought that she and raye were basically the main characters. But anyway, I really wanna see where this is gonna go now. What is everyone gonna do? How is this gonna affect this super altered time line? Although my one criticism for this chapter is that Sahria's shift felt a but too sudden. Yeah I understand that her mother died and that caused her to crack, but to want to kill the entire human race, despite all the friends she made in the Shepards... I feel like she should have shown a blatent disregard for human life or just a certain coldness in previous chapters before this in order to just snap like that. Or maybe theres something else behind it? Well we'll see soon enough, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Also Im excited for the heroes of the scouring to appear, you hardly ever see material written about them.

ok what the hell
when you said you might kill off a shepard i though you meant a minor one not one that would most likely cause a game over if they fell.
Plus all this build up with this OC and you just kill her off in a stupid way.
of all the group only 2 others were in that area? why did no other future children show up or better yet that archer from the other chapter take a shot at Iruna.
then again if Yana was supposed to be his mother then well not going to be born pretty much caused a time paradox there. sorry you had a good story going on till you brought weapons from the scouring in then it just rolled downhill from there. i can understand adding chars could change things story wise but not a bad guy spontaneously finding ALL of the most powerful weapons in the world which were most likely spread out for safe keeping. Plus on top of this all sahria just deciding to kill everyone friend and ally alike is a bit of a ass pull to add a new villain unless she was being possessed by Grima.

Wallace

too be honest this tiki all I am getting is her younger version in fire emblem heroes cause she doesn't sound serious except for family

"You should have gone for the head" lol. I love it. I liked this chapter and I cannot wait to see how exactly this is gonna deviate from the Valmese war. I've gotta say, Emmeryn is lucky that no other country besides Plegia and Valm wanted war, because if a country that was close by just chose to full on assult them, they'd have no chance without some form of an. Hell, idk how they're gonna win this with the little amount of soldiers they have. Atleast, Flavia has an army. But I think our hereos need some divine help. Either Naga, which you said is probably coming soon, or some divine weapons. The ones from FE4 are found in game, so maybe some of those. Or maybe the other FE7 weapons. Also honestly, if you want to, you can kill off some folks. I don't have much of an opinion, so long as you don't touch Chrom, Robin, Sahria, Lucina, or Morgan(who isnt even here yet lol). The Chrobin family are too dear to my heart and Sahria has really grown on me. I don't think you'll kill Raye or Yana till the end if at all so I left them off. But in all reality id probably keep reading anyway lol. Anyway, even though I'm a little sad without the more frequent updates, you do what you want man. Some authors go like a month or 2 without updates, so yeah. Anyway, I think I've rambles enough, so till next time!

Get smitted BITCH *giggles of increasing anticapation*

Ok does Chrom just have a thing against knocking? God he can be such a dolt sometimes lol. I think I liked Lissa's and Robin's scenes the most, although I liked how casual Miriel was about the whole thing. Although honestly I didn't think Lissa was even pregnant yet. I thought that Owain was gonna be one of the younger ones, but thats cool too. I can't wait to see some of the future kids now, especially Morgan and Owain. Also, I'm probably gonna faint too when my wife's giving birth, so don't worry it happens to the best of us lol. Till next time!

Ok goddamn. This was quite the chapter. I expected Walgart to come prepared but I never expdcted him to pull out the Elibian Divine weapons! That was a cool twist. Although Raye is kinda assuming when he says Walhart only has 2 left. Whats to say Walhart didn't get Muligar or Forblaze or something? Anyway, yeah I figured Ren'lo wouldn't last too long but it was still kinda sad to see Say'ri and Yen'fay lose their father in such a brutal way. Speaking of Say'ri, is there gonna be a little Say'rixTiki action later? I certainly wouldn't be opposed. I like those two together. Anyway, at first I thought those two people wielding Durandal and Maltet were Einherjars or something, but then you gave them names so that means that they're probably real people. I will admit, ai got kinda excited for a sec when reading that Durandal and Maltet were here because I thought my boy Eliwood would make an appearance. Also RIP Donnel. Atleast his bloodline will be carried on before hes brutally murdered by Raye lol. Anyway, can't wait for more!

Alright so firstly, I'm soo sorry for Tharja. Poor girl. Obviously I don't thunk Raye is gonna treat her like that other guy did bur ai can totally understand where shes coming from. Although I'm curious to see whats gonna happen with her and Raye because they haven't spent all that much time together, and I can understand her love at first sight thing, but I don't think Raye felt that so I'm gonna guess it'll be a bit before they get together. Also Baby Lucina is on her way! I can't wait. Although this means Walhart is coming too. Well I can't wait to see what Raye and Tiki were up to! Till next time!