this is like my 12th time reading this, I love this book so much

Such an amazing story, I am so glad I came across this.

I've been reading a lot os sasunaru fics but damn do I dare say that this is the best!
This had realism mixed with cliches in the right amount. This was a whole rollercoaster ride. You can follow the different povs of the characters. The fact that one action can invoke different thoughts from each person really hit me while going through this journey. And the fact that this was entirely written in Naruto's pov shows me that he had been thoughtful enough to catch those subtle hints from the people around him and act accordingly. This is one of the reasons why I like reading stories which are from the pov of a fairly thoughtful character.
You also described basic insecurities perfectly, for e.g. when naruto had stretch marks in post pregnancy.
The fact that they had gone through stages of crushing, confessing, commited relationship, pregnancy, infant caring, functional parents while being so young could not be felt while reading the story. Their bonding movements assuring their relationships, coping with problems made me stand on their side when they were being ridiculed for getting pregnant early. This is commendable.
I usually skip most of the steamy sections,cuz after reading many of these fics I got bored of reading the same thing over and over again. But in this story, there was love along with lust and by the time I'm done, I realised that I bingeread the entire story without missing a single word. There even were multiple of sex scenes but they went with the flow of the story.
All in all, I really loved the story and I sincerely hope that you successfully continue writing while getting the appreciation you deserve from readers like me. I for one have promised myself to bingeread every one of your fics. I will forever be your loyal fan!

Such an amazing story thank you. Loved the drama and loved that you continued on not just how they came together but their live after as well. Thank you for your hard work please continue to write, can’t wait to read more.

Hiii! Ive just recently got back to reading Sasunaru, and Im so happy to see one of my fave authors coming back to writing Sasunaru. WELCOME BACKK AUTHOR-SAN AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!

omg thanks! love it so far

I've read this beautiful multiple times on AO3 so it's nice to see it here too 3

It was beautiful. :3

Heyy...are you still going to be doing the other stories from this universe? Bcuz they sound very interesting and i love this universe so iv been looking out for them but iv only seem the one shot "metallic revenge". Just wondering if they are still stories to look out for?
Thanks for such a great universe. Hope to see more from it

I have been just glued to your story for the last few day(yes, I have a very busy 'always on the road' type the time schedule), but it didn't stop me from wanting to know what happens next! I am SO glad I got to find out what they were gonna have. Glad it was a girl. Bit I ain't gonna lie, I am sad we didn't get to read about her. Awesome fic! So happy you shared. Thanks.

I loved your story so much. I've reread it more than once and look forward to keeping up with the spinoffs

This is by far one of the most best fanfict I have read this year. I really enjoyed reading every chapter and anticipated the next scene. Absolutely great job and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

I loved your fic is very cool, sorry if the translation is bad, is that I really speak Spanish and read the story with the translator, and did not want to miss the opportunity to leave a comment. I really liked the plot and I will look forward to the next part.
Greetings until next time.

Beautiful!

OKAY, I FELT SOOO MANY EMOTIONS IN LIKE 10 MINS ITS CRAZY! You are OFFICIALLY my new binge-reading author! Keep up the phenomenal work! Til then... Mata ne Xx