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I like the story so far but. Why are you adding "san" to their names isn't avatar an american cartoon, and by the way I noticed about your grammatical error still great chapter

Awesome so far! Eagerly awaiting more.

Side note: Your English has improved tremendously throughout the story so far! If you get the chance once this is finishned, you should re-read the story and fix any spelling mistakes.

How naive of him... Even if he does have amnesia.

Gahh! I hate amnesia plots... they are so infuriating yet are so useful for character development. Only three more chapters till I get caught up and then I'll have to wait and find out what happens!

Hopefully Azula can remind Shun of who he is before Ozai manipulates him for his own ends.

Hope the Mc and Azula learn Lightning Bending.

I wouldn't put it past Ozai to give unseen manipulations to his 'apprentice' and Azula to get to know each other better. He'd certainly want the boys genes incorporated into the Royal Family.

Interesting

Needs grammar and spelling checks.

Great story and one of the best OC characters i have seen on this website! keep it up

Omg I had the same idea about who OC who bends black fire. Just read Chapter 1, seems to be fine quality. Gonna keep reading.

Awesome chapter.

Is this a person got reincarnated to avatar story or not? Sorry, i dont have much time.

Glad they are all on the same team.

The day started off weird enough for Jar Jar Mortdecai with some lovely morning munchen. Then he heard some loud nyyyaaaaing and looked around. There were a bunch of giant weeaboos heading straight for him! He started sobbing and levitated right into the path of a fabulous man who was running in the opposite direction. The man knocked Jar Jar Mortdecai to the forest floor and the weeaboos passed them by.

Jar Jar Mortdecai introduced himself to the man who was named Qui-Gon Levi, a Jedi poser. 'Mesa Culled Jar Jar Mortdecai. Mesa Your Humble body pillow.'

They were soon joined by Qui-Gon Levi's padawan King Julien Kenobi. Jar Jar Mortdecai offered to take Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi to his home city of Toys-R-Us-Gunga.

When they arrived at Toys-R-Us-Gunga Boss Melman , with a little pursuasion, offered the trio a neon furry oc to go through the Planet Core. Jar Jar Mortdecai said 'Better transgender here than transgender In Da Core' but then thought better of it and got in the neon furry oc with Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi.

While traveling through the Core the neon furry oc was almost obliterated by a fat-ass sea creature but that sea creature was eaten by another fatter sea creature first, prompting Qui-Gon Levi to say 'There’s always a bigger emo kid.' Jar Jar Mortdecai explained why he had been expunged from Toys-R-Us-Gunga in the first place - 'Yud-Say kissing den marrying Der Boss's Heyblibber, Den expunged .

The three managed to make it out of the Planet Core ball pit. They then went to Hot Topic where they rescued Queen Hillary Clinton from the Anime Fan Federation. They got on Hillary Clinton's Nimbus 3000 and headed towards Planet Puberty. 'What a horrible morning' thought Jar Jar Mortdecai 'Mesa hope nothing else wonderful happens!'