wow. this is really good! can't wait to read more when you're ready!

I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please please PLEASE don't stop writing this until it's finished! You may not have even thought about dropping this, but if you have, PLEASE DON'T. This magnificent piece of art needs to be completed and loved, and honestly this is one of the best HTTYD fics I've ever read. Thank you for creating this.

Are the other riders gonna show up at all later in the story

I have read many 'past meets future gang' stories. This is by far the best of all, good job!

You know, this chapter reminds me that there's still one Night Fury. It would have been quite interesting if past-Toothless was caught in the time-shift, and not out of the question given Stoick was brought back accidentally. Though that has given me an idea... you know what, nevermind. I have a Kindred-inspired HTTYD story to write. Thanks for the partial inspiration! (Octavia E. Butler gets the credit for the rest of the inspiration.)

I'd say you're doing great so far for your return.

And this chapter was good so I don't need to say much other than holy cow Snotlout's gonna give Hiccup lessons on how to fight while dragonback? What has the world come to? But honestly he's the only one with expertise who isn't busy at the moment. Astrid probably can't believe they need to take advice from Snotlout of all people and the in the heat of battle. And of course Snotlout might get all offended from young Astrid's criticism of his ability/or lack there of. If she saw him having trouble with Hookfang during that part where his past self pointed him out as the "best rider" she might be thinking he can hardly ride his own dragon, so he could he help them figure out how to fly a night fury? But he's the best they got right now.

Four twins. FOUR twins! *hysterical laughing* This is going to be fuuun... :) :P
And future-Snotlout too. He and his past self are going to be so annoying to deal with. Well, for Hiccup to deal with. *giggles* Why am I enjoying their pain so much? I can't wait to see what horrors they unleash upon Drago. :D Great chapter!

Cash is out. Peace!

Hehe, yeah. "You will be a fantastic enemy" is not a sentence you'd hear every day; no wonder Hiccup was baffled - and I feel like Viggo was well aware of that and was enjoying it :D

Another unusual sentence was "No one had missed the young Vikings when they had snuck off", just because it has two almost opposite meanings and yet it took me a while to figure out which one you meant...

A lot of huge, unelaborated on changes for young Hiccup, not only from the future but also "his" Astrid who had so far been the most resistant. But just like in the movie, once the shell of stubbornness is broken, she embraces the changes readily. (And literally, if you consider Hiccup to be the embodiment of the changes :D)

Immensely enjoying both Snotlouts in this chapter!

Aaaaah this new chapter was awesome ! So much action I love it ! Glad to see Astrid fully accepted the dragon now The end with Hiccstrid was so cute and I love Snotlout reaction to this, very him. See you next update

Yes new chapter WOOOOO
Hiccstrid bonding is beautifull thank you for keeping everybody so in character it's fantastic

I'd like to say, this might be the best take on a time-travel idea I've seen yet. Not a high bar to be honest, but this seems quite promising.

Oh, boy. Getting lessons from Snotlout on how to fight with a dragon. this is going to be...

I'm not sure if I should call it /enlightening/ or /entertaining./ Maybe...enterlightening? lightentaining? Bah.

You're definitely leading up to a good climax! I'm looking forward to what well-planned chaos you throw together for the next fight!

Next update let there be more a talk between adult astrid and fourteen astrid. Thank you Great story

Yes, but I think you know why everyone wants Drago dead. The twins are here? Yay! Mini twins and big twins! This is going to be fun!
I think you depict younger Astrid quite well.
By the way if the baby is born in this story can you name the baby Solveig if it's a girl?