From the A/N in chapter 16: I wish fanfiction authors would ignore books 5, 6, and 7. The story was changed drastically in those books from the story I had enjoyed. The character of several of the Weasley family became ugly, for the short term that Sirius survived he could have been exonerated, and Dumbledore became an ineffectual manipulator.
I always enjoy stories that occur prior to book 5 the most.

My guess is that Sirius isn't really Sirius

Hello, you mentioned a third part and I’m not sure which one is the third one. I love this story so if you could tell me that would be great, thanks!
Delia

OMG that was an emotional rollercoaster great story took me 3 dAys to read but I really enjoyed it. Fantastic read. (Would love to know what really happened to sirius and how there last year would be)

Good

Yep your characters are just stupid. And I mean that for supposedly bright kids, they are retarded.

Hate stories that drag the stArt of the relationship out. It's infuriating and just makes the characters seem moronic.

dude or dudete I also feel like Harry and hermione belong together. i never got the whole concept of the relationship between ron and hermione but the moment i watched harry potter for the first i shipped harry with hermione

dude or dudete I also feel like Harry and hermione belong together. i never got the whole concept of the relationship between ron and hermione but the moment i watched harry potter for the first i shipped harry with hermione

Ok dude or dudett, this is pretty good so far, but don't hit enter in the middle of a sentence or write the same word except the tenses are either past or present. And I believe I saw this is his 6th year, Sirius Black had been killed at the end of Harry's 5th year. Not trying to disrespect this fix or anything, but a little clarification would be helpful.

Pretty good fanfic. Enjoying it so far

I really love this story but I felt Hermione was way too forgiving. Harry dated many girls but Hermione forgave him, he pushed her away she forgave him, didn't tell her about Sirius she forgave him didn't trust her with his powers and she forgives him. seems like Harry takes her for granted.
really love this story!

Please forgive my confusion, but what exactly is a merlin, and how is it Harry's Animagus form?

Otherwise, awesome story, and I can't wait to read more.

Your story has a good start, but...your habit of the same word in different tenses..."Ginny has had..." or "She She'd...
This really interrupts the flow of your story. You might want to go thru it and correct this by choosing either one or the other.

ı love you murat boz