I can't say I really enjoyed this chapter. Some of it was because I've read too much FF so it was somewhat cliche in the backstory exposition and some of it was a bit too angsty for me? Still, overall I'm really enjoying the story, but I'm definitely looking forward to moving past the intro/depression arc and moving onto more of whatever you really have planned for the story. Thanks!

Another lovely and sweet chapter where Harry finally opens up to Jemma. Found Harry's "theories" about why Jemma is so mature utterly hilarious.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Luna

Thanks for the new chapter.

Another wonderful chapter as Jemma and Harry explore the possibilities!
A few questions: As Jemma can see Harry, does that mean that she is also slightly out of phase with her current universe? Is Harry able to use magic while incorporeal (it hasn't really been made clear)?
So far, this has been a delightful tale and I look forward to seeing how you develop this premise. On another note, do you need someone to Brit-pick these chapters? I have seen quite a few americainisms which have seemed out of place.
Keep up the brilliant work!
Luna

intresting

I love this so much

Interested to see where you go with this. Thanks. :)

Oh my gosh, this is awesome! When I found out it was Jemma Simmons, I kind of squealed. This whole idea is really interesting so far and I'm intrigued about what sort of direction you will take it.
Keep up the good work!
Luna

very interesting

That was amazing! I don't really review all that often but to not review would have been frankly a by act.I hope you continue the story it deserves to be written and shared (unlike some stories that I am sure you have also stumbled upon)