Reviews for Coco AU: Witnesses
james clark ray chapter 6 . 5/15
i think Ernesto deserved It when Imelda smacked him in the face with her shoe for killing hector and especially for that crack he made about killing her and coco instead of hector
james clark ray chapter 6 . 5/10
you know I was wondering what would happen if Ernesto de la cruz crime of murdering hector and stealing his songs was exposed before he died rather then his crime being exposed several decades later after he died his fans aren't going to like the fact that their favorite singer is a murderer and a thief but in your story Ernesto is getting what he deserves he is being thrown into jail and Imelda gave a few well deserved hits to the face with her shoe especially for that crack about how he should've killed her and coco instead talk about someone standing up for a fallen family member I really admire the respect the Mexicans have for their fallen family members and the reason the movie coco is such a huge tearjerker for me especially the song remember me is because my in 2016 the year before the movie coco came out in 2017 my cousin alex died I really miss him and its been 4 years since he died because he was a close friend of mine amongst my cousins and each time I watch the movie coco and hear the song remember me I become an emotional train wreck and to conclude my comment this is a good idea for a story looking forward to the end of the story and seeing how Imelda and her daughter coco are going to take care of themselves after hectors passing
AlxkendBlader chapter 6 . 10/30/2019
Hoo boy, we got a request spammer here! Shove off!
CreatedInFyre7 chapter 6 . 10/29/2019
Just found this story!
Please keep writing as I would love to see how this ends.
kaia chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
very well written! keep going
Luiz4200 chapter 6 . 7/24/2019
No need to worry. Ernesto and Imelda are in character.
ainmals1 chapter 6 . 7/23/2019
Welcome back.

I have been waiting patiently for this, not to mention I was cooling off by going to my Aunt's house to swim. These last few days have been as humid as heck I couldn't do too much of anything.

Two chapters left huh? Not too long.

Anyway. Wow! I knew that Imelda would throw a fit once she sees Ernesto. And I was just as shocked as everyone else when he said he should have killed Imelda and Coco instead. What a jerk, I'm so glad Imelda hit him with her show and made him bleed.

Keep updating.
AliceCullen3 chapter 6 . 7/23/2019
LOVE IT!
Nova chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
Hey my birthday is on May 6th and I was wondering if you could do a birthday request for me.
It's a Coco Zorro au
With Hector as Zorro.
Please do it for my birthday.
You are a good writer.
And this story is great.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
I like the story. Can't wait to read chapter 6. I hope it comes out soon.
Carol B chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
Do you take suggestions?
I have a suggestion for a fanfic you can do.
A Coco Zorro au.
Please do it.
My birthday is tomorrow.
Molly chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
Please do a Coco Zorro au.
I know it sounds wierd but I saw this fan art af Imelda dressed up in a Zorro like costum and I totally wanted to see that as a fic even if it's wierd. Please do it I am sure it will be awesome.
Ally Anderson chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
Ok so I have this wierd but also interesting idea for a Coco fanfiction.
It's a Coco Zorro au well kind of.
In this world "the land of the dead" is ruled by a evil tyrant.
And though they you can't be killed in the land of the dead you can get put into prison, or even tortured and even beaten by the evil ruler and/or his soldiers.
The forgotten are treated as slaves.
So Zorro is there to help.
In this world Ernesto never poisoned Hector and Hector wrote songs and send them to Ernesto.
Ernesto gives Hector credit for writing the songs and they both become rich and famous.
However Hector still dies young say like 32.
In the land of the dead Hector sees what is going on and wants to help.
And he remembers the Zorro radio plays he used to listen to as a kid.

And so he becomes El Zorro.
And Hector has a horse ajebre he named Tornado because the horse moves really fast.
I know it's a wierd idea but at the same time it could be fun.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
I have a few ideas for fanfictions you can do please consider some of them.
1. A Coco Aladdin au
Hector as Aladdin
Imelda as Princess Jasmine
Ernesto as Jafar
Pepita as Raja the tiger
Dontè as Abu
I don't know who would be the genie probably an oc.
2. Ok now this story is just played for laughs but it's a story where Hector, Imelda, Mama Coco , Miguel's parents, and all of the adult Rivera's are turned into babies.
3. Hector's thoughts when Imelda is giving birth to Coco and how Hector feels when He sees his baby girl for the first time.
4. A story where Miguel is all grown up and has a daughter of his own.
5. This story is based on the movies "the Mask Of Zorro and it's sequel The legend Of Zorro"
Hector is Don Diego De La Vaga (the original Zorro)
Miguel in this fic is 18 years old and is Alejandro ( the new Zorro)
An oc Character as Elena (the love interest to Aljandro or in this case Miguel)
This oc character is also Hector's granddaughter not daughter.
And Ernesto is the Bad guy.
I hope you'll consider at least one of these ideas of mine.
Emily Derison chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
After you are done with this, can you do a fanfiction request for me please?
It's a Coco Zorro au based on the television show The New World Of Zorro from the 90s on the family channel.
(If you have not already seen the show there's full episodes on YouTube, and it's really good and fun to watch)
As for the cast it should be
Hector as Zorro
Imelda as Victoria
Miguel as Filepè
and Ernesto De La Cruz as the Alcalde.
Please use this for a story.
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