Quite good work.

Uhm, you mention Yang and Blake are fighting a King Taijitu, but the description of the fight implies a Deathstalker. King Taijitu are the half black, half white snakes with a head on either end. Deathstalkers are the huge scorpions with gold/yellow stingers.

Well, she ded.

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Awesome

Summer rose and you could make one up or the siver eyes

Not gonna lie I totally forgot about what happened to Salem between chapters so seeing her here was a bit of a shock until my memory kicked in. Maybe it might be a good idea when chapters release after a large enough space to include a recap of previous events and or a previously in the story.
Beyond that I like how the Godesses interacted with Amber and I am curious to see where that goes.
Can't wait for the update.

This story just got 20% cooler

Interesting this was.

Save our best boy Ironwood, lads. Godspeed. Good chapter, I think you really pulled off Ironwood's fighting style in words well. Looking forward to the next one.

Are you still alive? Ii really like this story!

Bit of confusion halfway through this first chapter - link and Zelda are entering a region where forever fall thins out, Zelda mentions that she’s going to go dignitary mode, and suddenly there’s a man talking to them. Where’d the man come from? Has the scene changed? Did they make it to the buildings?

You missed a little bit of set building, there.

This was a good chapter.

It's difficult to tell when Link is actually talking because he doesn't have any quotation marks or anything. Can you fix this?

Wow I hope Ozpin chokes on his own self importance. He's reminding me a lot of Dumbledork (he was an asshole, don't lie. Letting the philosopher's stone have like NO PROTECTION, Knowing who the heir of slytherin was, not having a trial for sirius, trying to manipulate harry, he was not a good guy). That said, you are making the couple so fucking cute. I love the romcom this is, and a good one at that.