| Reviews for A Long Awaited Physical |
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KratosStinky chapter 1 . 9/1/2019 I love it so bad ! THANK U ! Really, Thank u for sharing with us :D |
EmpressNariko chapter 1 . 3/15/2019 Love it! |
MHatake1 chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 Thank you for writing, such a fun read! |
Sincce P chapter 1 . 2/3/2019 God's, this was sinful! I loved it, the way you built up sooo much anticipation and how hot and steamy those two are together. Just wow. I'll absolutely binge read all the other stories now, that I've seen how you wrote these two! Just enchanting! |
phiphi78 chapter 1 . 1/3/2019 That was amazingly hot ! I need to read more of this, I want to see what happens next haha |
50blades chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 This is a wonderful one-shot. I love it when Kakashi as HokageSakura as the accomplished med-nin, go toe to toe in their power struggles. Their titles add amusement to their struggles for dominance. |
Loulou713 chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 I just read your bio about you writing this stuff for a while but just now posting it! Love your writing style! You’re doing amazing! |
superwholock187 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 I loved this! |
Rena Katsueki chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 Whew I need a glass of cold water after that one! I love how Kakashi went from embarrassed to animal in like 0.2 seconds! That Chunnin though! Omg what timing! I really hope that he does pass his physical which I am sure he will *drools* Cheers~ |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 i just need to tell you that this smut needs a continuation of more smut HAHAHA i love it its funny and entertaining and hot |
TipsyRaconteur chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 I know I already read this on Tumblr, but what do you know, I just had to read it again. I love how you built up tension, and I am so impressed that this is your first foray into the wonderful land of smut. Bravo! I hope to see more from you. |
Team Miriku chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 I really enjoyed both this and your multichaptered “experiment” - you’re great at slow building tension. The only concrit I have is that sometimes you overuse italics (for emphasis) and it drags me out of the story. I’d try to balance it out a bit more - sometimes the emphasis is unnecessary and I would have read it in my mind like that anyway, without being told to, if that makes sense! |
LadiKourtney chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 I mean . . . That was . . . Whoa. |