Reviews for Not Today
Mayonaka Yue chapter 1 . 6/20/2019
Ah Peter you always have to be self sacrificing don't you.
EmmaDel chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
I like the relationship in the story between Tony and Peter. I think Peter would try to protect Tony in that situation. There are just a few details that are bothering me. How does the blood get on Tony's shirt? The bullet would have to have gone through Peter but not hit Tony in order for the blood to get on his shirt. Also I was confused as to why anesthesia wouldn't work on him. That is something I've never heard before. Lastly why was Aunt May called so late. I would be royally pissed if my son was shot and folks waited hours to call me. Someone would catch hell. Also she is his legal guardian and would have to be consulted by the hospital for his medical history and insurance information.
franzi86 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
Oh my, wonder 8f Peter's spidey-sense will warn him of his aunt's fury and how long he and Tony can feign sleep to get away from her. And poor Pete, who'll be yelled at from two sides... Or Tony will have mercy after being put in his place like a school boy by May himself.
ELOSHAZZY chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Spidy just saved Tony’s life! Tony is more then Peter’s mentor he is his adopted father. So glad that they have each other. :-)
Super secret bob chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Mr Alan I hate you!
How dare you attack Tony stark and spid.. His intern!
I will snap my gauntlet at if you EVER think about hurting them again!
Good story btw, you probably will see me again :D
Keep it up :)
Luckias chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
That was really great, I enjoyed reading this one-shot ! I hope you'll do more father/son fanfics like this :D
remiparker chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
This was beautiful
MLAkittenz chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
Awww! I just love them both soo much. I can’t wait to see more of this! This really reminded me that in the end he’s just a cute, adorable, innocent kid. And Tony’s well... he’s Tony. Keep going with all your amazing writing!
Katie MacAlpine chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
That was a good, well written story. Those two are meant to be together.