I hope you continue in making the story,it’s very funny to see Gentoku with his vest and silly t-shirt. Will you do a pairing for this story?

Cool, but while CrocodiCon is his primary is CrocoKey his go to form? It feels better having him have that as his standard form like RabbitTank is for Sento.

Awesome chapter

...let's just say Otoya played his violin one last time...
Anyway, i'm not taking back Gentoku not being in character, but I can see you've improved on this at the very least.
Keep it up.

great and awesome characters interactions between gentoku and the other riders. the fight is okay. need more improvement.

This was really good. I got to say thatI like the ideas you’re presenting here and seeing Rogue get some love is great.

As for issues, it’s mostly grammatical. You forgot to capitalize some of the words when you started a new sentence. It’s the only error I was able to catch anyway.

Darkness! Light! BALANCE MATCH! *insert excerpt from a Kingom Hearts song* Are You Ready? "Henshin!" OPEN YOUR HEART! DARKLIGHT! SUGEE!

"I am Rogue! KAMEN RIDER ROGUE!"

LET'S FINISH! "Rrrrrraaaaagggghhhhh!" *BOOM!*

...oh yes, before I forget-Rogue is hilariously out of character, from the little i've seen.

yeah that would be a cool idea
if it werent for Gentoku suddenly becoming comedy relief in episode 40.

Interesting story

Curious to see where this goes wonder what kind matches will rouge make can't wait for what comes next great job!

Dang this is really interesting, hope he get's the crocodile best match to transform with remocon

Not bad work on this chapter, and it's a very interesting idea you have here. I can't wait to see how this story progress further on.