it's been a while but I'm just hoping for an update
this was so good I can't with that cliffhanger

What a horrible cliffhanger! Can we find out who the baby daddy is? Why no one knew Jessie was pregnant? Where the hell did Jessie go? Who did Rick call? I need answers and I hope chapter 2 clears everything up.

thematsaidwelcome

A great beginning

Great story! I'd love to know more about who Rick was avoiding. Good writing about the kids and the baby. Unfortunately, babies being treated like this happens much much too often. Hope you continue!

Well damn! I wasn't expecting this one. I love the way you build your worlds. There's a dedication to details that I always look out for and you didn't disappoint with this one.

Michonne is a good teacher, intervening when she did, knowing something critical was going down but not quite placing what it was. Jessie and Lori seem to have a history and we put Shane smack dab in the middle. Really good writing in that scene.

I was very surprised when she found the baby in the trash and knowing young Jessie was going through that alone made me feel some kind a way.

Lori stay Triflin.

And of course Rick swoops in with comfort and care like no other. I loved that she can be vulnerable with him and cry in his arms after being the strong one all night.

The background stories got me hook. Loved that they're having a baby too!

I can easily read more of this.

Sophia

Too much! You gotta at least do another chapter. Who was Rick avoiding and why? Who is the baby daddy? Scandal!

I'm stunned. This is a nightmare for all involved. The poor baby, Jessie, Shane, Michonne and somehow Rick is affected? I am curious and need answers.

Yeah I would like to know who Rick is calling afternot talking to them for two years. And Jessie got knocked up by Shane. Lol. And Lori knew and that’s why she’s so pissed at Jessie and Shane. Well I don’t think she knew about the Baby but she definitely knew that horndog Shane was sleeping around. Glad that Rick and Michonne don’t have to deal with Lori as she’s a teenager dealing with horndog Shane.

daddy shane/messie jessie mom.. poor little angel got the short end as parents go... rick wait!michonne wanted some time to think, about thangs love,,,,...

That was super shocking at the end! The whole chapter was great but that isn’t what I expected at all! It also curious about who Rick called! I’m curious about a lot of it. Love this opening and I can’t wait to see where this story goes. Thank you for sharing this!

Wow! This is some heavy stuff. I loved it. What an original way to use these characters. I hope you find a way to continue because I am dying to know what happens.

Oh god I don't have a good feeling about this... Damn cliffhangers! Please continue this!

Oh shit! Who rick called?

Nooooooo ugh I need to start reading A/N before getting attached to the stories ughhhhh I like it so much and I was excited to see where it goesss I was gonna ask for an update as soon as possible and a long chapter but I read your note and all my dreams are shattered I really loved this shot and I hope you decide to complete it

you are so wrong to make this a one shot with this cliffhanger. I was so into it. Of course shane knocked up jessie and she told lori and she got pissy. i wonder who Rick called. thanks and I hope that you will continue this. thank you