Please update soon because this is really interesting and intriguing story

I’m glad that all the secrets are out! Now i’m Interested to see how the future unfolds because we know it is always changing.

This prophecy is terrifying but Emma is amazing and brave. I am glad Killian knows, he will do everything he can to protect her but I am not sure what he can do. She believes too much in the prophecy.

Henry getting his Author powers was very good. I have to remember he can only record the past, is that right? Or can he help his family see the future and prepare for the fight? Can he write the future? He has to accept that Emma may be saying goodbye. How will this resolve? Thanks for the long chapter with a unique aspect, looking forward to the rest.

Great update. I hope Emma talks to Killian more sooner than later. I know she believes she must handle everything on her own, but they really do make such a good team.

I loved Emma’s kiss with Killian but it is so sad that she has such regret. She needs to tell him why she is holding back. He will fight for her. I like Elsa and Liam. Snow realizes there is a lot of new love in the house. That was cute! I hope their plan is solid enough. I worry if the Dark One can be trapped as they hope. He may just trick them too. Thanks for the chapter.

I like this story. Not much happened, but at least it is advancing the story, and establishing some couples. And I am definitely here for the CS and Liam and Elsa

I like that they are traveling together and helping one another. The alliance is good, a pack and a coven together have a better chance of defeating the Dark One than either group alone. I like Snow as leader and Regina as most experienced with magic. Will Robin have interest in Regina? I like Liam and Elsa together, shy and yet attracted. I am worried about the prophecy of Emma losing her life in this fight. That would be tragic. Henry is adorable! Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the rest.

Things are really picking up nicely. I’m excited to see how well this alliance plays out. Especially since we know Emma and Killian make a good team

Great start. Looking forward to reading more of this.

Fascinating and so different. A pack and a coven! They are soon to be working together to defeat the Dark One. I think Liam and Elsa could be friendly. They have to pack and move in the morning, don’t they? This is great. Looking forward to the rest.

Fantastic start! I’m so ready for this

Really good! Rumple as a witch hunter is intriguing, and Emma as a witch is very interesting. Nice to see Henry and Liam in a story like this too. Looking forward to the rest.

really nice beginning! I want to see more of it

I love this so far! Can never get enough werewolf Killian and Emma being in a witch coven is pretty awesome. I’m really excited for the next chapter!