Amazing fic! This concept is very underrated, but Harry’s Horrocrux definitely exacerbated Hermione’s and Ron’s faults, I think. Your writing is so beautiful, I love it 3

Speechwriter...your madness is incredibly insightful and profound! That was...amazing! What an inadequate word. I've never considered the fact of Tom's presence in Harry. The concept of Harry as horcrux turns up so late in the story, but of course he'd been present all of Harry''s life. I feel like your story has exploded my brain a bit! What you wrote was beautiful, dark and poetic, but also completely logical. If the piece of soul within a horcrux has the power to ensnare anyone who spends any time in contact with it, then of course Ron and Hermione would be affected by Harry''s constant company! Wow! Mind blown! It would have been interesting if this part of the HP reality had been played with more in the original stories. We see some unusual passion and unreasonable responses from R and H in the later books books but they're not really outside the realm of hormone fueled jealousies and personal insecurities. Wow! I'm still geeking out about this. Thank you Speechwriter for such a gripping exposition of the inner working's of our Golden Trio. This is going to stick in my head forever!

What a story! I really enjoyed the premise and think that this is a really interesting way of thinking of Hermione's character

Very interesting take on Hermione! I enjoyed it.

This was so very well written, I am shook!

This was excellent! I never thought about how Harry's Horcrux state would affect those around him.

This is fricken fantastic! I Love when people explore how the Horcrux impacted Hermione and/or Ron.

i am in awe. Every story I read is a revelation of another possible HP angle.

This is fantastic

Absolutely loved it! the pacing, the wording, the feelings... All of it felt perfect! I particularly liked Hermione's thoughts on Tom and their conversation.
Thanks a lot for sharing!

This was seriously brilliant. It sucked me in completely, and there is a lot of fanfiction I have not read but for me this was a very original concept and you wrote about it so well. I have not looked yet to see if you have any other stories but I hope so!

Haunting.

I'd like to imagine that Hermione's true self won out in the end, otherwise they couldn't have destroyed the Horcruxes and finally Voldemort.

Ooh! I'd never thought through the implications of that quote. I like! Thank you for this post, always love reading your writing :)

Just wow! I have no words...this is amazing!

You must understand how gorgeous and beautiful this is. I can't explain it, it's like you took this and it has a life of its own. The honestly and the struggle that everyone is experiencing...it reminds me of Possession (1981), which you should totally watch. Thank you for writing this! :)