Cool. Very nice chapter. Glad to hear you are planning to keep writing this story. It's getting interesting. :)

I really like how this story is going. It keeps getting interesting and is very well written. You described perfectly the characters and their thoughts and actions.

Well, I'll be damned - a brand new T&M story! And such a good one at that! Please keep going, this story is making the commute to work so much more bearable! :)

Fantastic! Don’t leave us hanging for too long!

Love the story. Looking forward to reading more!

Fantastic Story.