Ug, YES. Love me some mommah beifong moments! Especially the lovey ones and the sad ones. They are the best! And I so dig the more frequent mentions of ibaki. Looking forward to more!

Hello, this is AvidLoreReader, but you know my previous guest reviews as AvidReader. If you wish to discuss my previous reviews and suggestions, I believe you can now.

I also had a suggestion about a flashback scene with Lin and her uncertainty of becoming a mother. It could be very touching to see an interaction between Lin and Ibaki as a couple. Also having the potential of showing some motherly worry for her unborn child, regarding the possibility that he had been born blind and a non-bender. This could be a valid concern since Toph was born blind and not every child of a bending couple is a bender (example Tenzin's brother Bumi).

Best regards and eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Nice

For something later for book 4 when Korra meets up with toph should have toph punch Korras arm and say that's for leaving without telling my grandson since tophs connected to the whole planet she would know there relationship and kenai be apart of operation beifong

This is just a idea you don't have to do it it's your story

Im really looking forward to seeing how suyin and toph is in this story

I agree weird not having the main character speak and just lounging about in the story. I figured Lin would have threatened to knock some more heads but maybe next chapter?

Here I was hoping for an update! :/

Lol one reviewer is pretty heated for some reason. Anyways, this website has problems pretty often so people shouldn't jump to conclusions. I've been a silent reader, but I wanted to say I am really enjoying the story so far and am looking forward to future updates.

I will never understand Guest reviews. An account on is free, so why don't they just create an account?

In any case, the recent chapters have been amazing, and I hope Chapter 14 isn't far away.

got my hopes up for another chapter. damn

Trae el próximo capítulo ya quiero ver la pelea de korra contra el trenzitas

To author
I like this story.

My previous review isn't appearing either because you deleted it for me daring to criticize you story, or some other reason.
As I said before, Korra crying for a guy she knows for a couple of weeks... sure. Don't give me that relationship bullshit as an excuse. There's no way enough of development between them for this, maybe if you made him Korra's childhood friend.
Secondly. Why are all Legend of Korra OC's such fucking wimps? I wanna see someone who gets blood on their hands.

I hope I'm not bothering you with these suggestions, but I believe that you could rectify three issues that I had with the show.
One: Like a fellow reviewer I think that Korra shouldn't have automatic control over the avatar state. She should go through the same journey Aang did (as well as all the other avatars), so she has a greater understanding and respect for the power she has. p.s. it could be touching to see her in an uncontrolled state where only Kenai can coax her out of it.
Two: In the original series the spirits appeared more divine, beings who's very presence altered nature, and as Iroh said not to be trifled with. I would recommend keeping in tune with this notion, since they appeared kind of cartoonish in Legend of Korra.
Three: If you continue the story into the Water Tribe Civil War, approach it in the same manner as the 100 year war. Meaning it is more about power and conquest than bringing about the end of the world. I can see Unalaq having the conceited idea of using the spirits to rule with an iron fist. Only to be betrayed by Vatu and the dark spirits. Because I seriously don't see the spirit of Chaos sullying himself by merging with a human.
All I wish to do is give you a few ideas and the inspiration to keep the story going, because I think you're doing a better job with it than the show's writing team did. Best regards.

First of all, I would like to say happy belated birthday. Secondly, this was a remarkable chapter, you truly have the writer's gift. Having read some of your other stories (all well done), I believe this one is your best and hope you continue it into the final season. It would be interesting to see how Kenai's presence would affect each seasons storyline.

I'm also a fan of the respective emotional development of Korra and Lin. Korra has shown greater range of emotions and understanding, which is something the writers of the show somewhat failed at. As for Lin, the aspect of finding love after her relationship with Tenzin then losing her husband in such a tragic way all the while pushing through the anguish so she can be the mother Kenai needed is amazing. It truly illustrates the inner strength that has become synonymous with the Beifong family.

Also I enjoyed the detective twins, a nice called back to Avatar and I hope to see them again. Especially, since in the original Avatar series even minor allies like; Bato, Haru, and the freedom fighters had a part to play.
I also have a humble suggestion, during the initial battle for the city Kenai could be separated from the others, and while searching for his friends, he ends up saving a group of civilians and his comrades in the police/fire fighting department. And when Korra and the others return they find him leading a resistance movement. It would be an opportunity to demonstrate Kenai's and Korra's ability to lead. Again this a mere suggestion, your story your rules. Best regards and eagerly awaiting the next chapter.