Hahaha...:sighs: I certainly hope so. Nice work, madepending even a littletter teary. Keep it up!

i cried when misty left...

and i think every pokeshipper

did...

dont be afriad to show your feelings

That was a really nice story. Wish I could say more, except:

Keep on writing and updating!

wonderful! bravo!oncore!lovly...i want a nuber 2!

Nice story. I want to read a sequel of this. Keep up the good work.

Sore ima su so kawaii ka suzushi na n de mo...
(It is so cute or cool whatever... (I think) (in japanese)

it's really great!plz wright a u do,plz do D2M.a lil thing i call death 2 may!

So cute!

Right until now, i know hakura's english name, i didn't knew.

I can't stop reading misty's departures fics, even if it's sad and disturbing that she leaves, i like it cuz it so kawaii _~

Well, that's kind of it!

Bye

A bit of an unusual ending for what's seemingly a one-part story, but very well done. It'll seem odd if you don't continue this. Good job.

oh man i am a huge fan of pokemon, but with work and everything(yes im a 13 year old with a job lol) i cant really watch the series anymore. so basically, this story was very much like the show. please please please, dont leave me hanging here. i've gotta see what happens next!

Short and sweet. A nice AAML. I could see Ash sitting there depressed, but Misty came back, so it's all good. : P

Actually, Ash gave Misty a reminder too, his pokemon league hat (which is why he has a different in Pokemon Advanced).

A war between Misty and May is something I have yet to see on and is dying to be written.

That was pretty good! It's all like, in the end, Misty's all like, throwing May in the like, lake?

Lol

Well, overall, this was well authored and thought out. How did it end for you?

WHE! That was so great. :) I think you need to post a sequel. This was good. AAML 4-ever.

Oh, Gosh, it's so cute!

You write very well, it's a great story, made by a great writer!

Please, make a sequel!

PLEASE!