Loving the rewrite of this story. Awesome job.

So nice wauw shiro as a real dragon so awesome i really love it

Cant wait for chapter 5

Keep having fun writing it and know i will be waiting for more no matyer how long it takes

This chapter is awesome and really funny to especially at the last part that they got shearia turning red and that shuhei said she was a good third party i laughed tears in my eyes.

I really enjoyed the chapter and would love to read further what i certainly would do because i will now go for the for now last chapter , chapter 4

Tap tap i go to chapter 4 XP

I really loved the chapter i laughed so hard at the part that grimm started to say that he had toshiro never seen in his adult form that my room mate was looking weird at me.

It is an awesome and interesting story very nice

And now onwards to chapter 3

That was really awesome

Awesome

This is so awesome!

I like this revision! Cant wait to see where it goes.

Definitely looking forward to this story. It sounds as though it will be very interesting.
So I take it they'll all be in a kind of 3way relationship? Anyway, I like all the combos of those 3 regardless.
Best of luck!