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L is british not japanese

I never even considered a crossover between these 2 but this is surprisingly great. I am curious to see how this progresses because Light is smart but now he has 2 detectives of similar intellect. I notice how long ago the last update was but it’s shorter than a lot I’ve seen so I’m not too concerned this won’t continue. I await the next update hopefully soon

This is so well written! I love it.

I love it
Please make more

Could u rewrite this chapter with the advice I have given u?

Not a smart move on Wayne's part being clumsy during the limo driver scene, he could have have inspected the orphanage after he visited L to avoid suspicion. Bruce is a lot more careful than that, now he has a secret compartment exposed and the limo driver maybe more suspicious of him to. Also having Bruce Wayne approach the Light after the murder was also a bad move, he should have worn a disguise like some baggy hand me down clothes, trench coat, scarf, scruffy face with some dirt and make to look like five a clock shadow, and died his hair gray and wear brown flat cap hat. That way light wouldn't recognize him and not be a possible death note victim.

He can't write Bruce's name in the details section without killing him too. He can, however, use a vague description such as "the person next to me" or "an American." In the case of Penber, if he was specified in the original jacking at all, was probably referenced as "a law enforcement officer on the bus" or something similar, as he knew the person was likely a cop or something similar working for L.

I hate Light. He is just a deluded killer but...Scarecrow is finally dead. HORAY!