Really good, thrilling chapters. Dang hope Lucy can somehow hold out! I am praying that she and Natsu get an opportunity to lay a whooping on Veronica. :)

Yikes I am slightly surprised that she got kidnapped and wasn't able to fight off the sleep spell. The argument wasn't that much of a surprise honestly since Natsu can naturally be pretty hot-headed. Hope there are some cool scenes coming up. :)

Amazing story!

Go Lucy! Lol Juvia! xD This was a fun, long chapter. I cannot wait to see what happens now when Lucy tries to contact Nashi.

Go MIRA! Love seeing her in action. So happy that you gave her the spotlight here. I'm hoping to see some of the others also get a chance to shine. :)

So, Black Rose have something to do with Edolas Zeref. I suspected them of being a dark guild, but this confirms it.

They're probably the reason he escapes in Nashi's timeline too. At least now the guild knows there's a current enemy connected to a future threat.

Geez blood magic! Woo that is gonna be a doozy to beat but I think Natsu or Lucy is likely best suited to beat her. This is getting fun fun fun! :D

Dang that one got a good punch in on Laxus! Yikes! Loving this so far. :D

This’s is going to sound very picky, but you do not need to keep referring to Lucy every time a new sentence come up, let a long the fact that it is the first word. Try and be more creative about how tryouts create PARAGRPHS then. Even in school, your teacher would/ should point this out and suggest a way to make it more coherent and flow nicer.

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Awe that was amazing! I love that Lucy is so kick ass! Can't wait to see Lucy's response!