| Reviews for They should have listened |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/31 holy shit; that’s dark |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23 I really liked this story, especially what you described at the end, with Snape, the Malfoys, and the Chamber of Secrets allusion just before. My only critiques are that I don't think Hogwarts is the type of place to condone, let alone enact, corporal punishment, and the part where Snape is reading the police officer's mind is a bit unclear with all the pronouns and Snape saying Obliviate for some reason. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22 I legit tknew there wss going to be a riot should have killed him so it comes full circle |
Random User chapter 1 . 7/17 Well, that sure was depressing... |
Lani chapter 1 . 5/22 And it all snowballed. I love this story, I appreciate the work you put into it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30 America had no problem nuking japan to end ww2 its hard to believe rheyll have a problem doing the exact same thing to voldie and friends |
lexi chapter 1 . 4/11 WHY WHY DIDNT YOU LISTEN DUMBLEDORE I USED TO LIKE YOU YOUR A MONSTER AND YOUR STUPID GREATER GOOD KILLED EVERYONE LOOK WHAT YOU HAVE DONE I CANT BELIEVE IT YOU DONT DESERE DEATH ITS TO QUICK YOU DESERVE TO BE MURDERED PAINFULLY BY HARRY EVEN THOUGH HE'S DEAD IT DOSENT MATTER ! Goodness I need to stop I sound like molly weasley... Molly ... |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20 ... Well then, I searched for fanfiction where dumbledore found out about Harry's abuse and this was one if the search results. And I thought oh, maybe Harry's gonna die, but then that happened and I thought oh wow, I did not expect that. It was pretty good, maybe a bit rushed at the end but good in a dark, morbid way. |
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 2/12 Read it again ... Lady Fate doesn't like Know-it-All meddling Headmasters messing with her plans! Would love to see what happened to AD after he died and the truth about his For-the -greater-good-of Albus-many-names-Dumbledore's own glory , honour and power and finacial gain! |
MOARMY FOREVER chapter 1 . 12/27/2019 Wow. This is...it's very sad and it seems like a very likely scenario. |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Harry should be standing up harsh about his abuse. Abuse is not disabled and the Head Master and Snape are condoning abuse. And everyone believing all the blasted lies. Along with the fact, Harry is being starved and beaten. I hope in the end All the Teachers along with the Dursleys need to be punished and I sure as hell hope they are punished I hate Authors who allow them to get away with their crimes and Harry being hurt even more even killed. And Based on the summary and at the end of the chapter/story. Plus from what I saw at the end while using the text to speech I notice that the Head Master and Dumbledore are still free when they should be in prison, in fact, every single member of the Staff of Hogwarts along with the entire ministry should be in prison as accessories to the when it comes to abuse and not listening when they come to them for help and do nothing, in fact, all the teachers at Harry's primary school should be in prison as well. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2019 AAAAAAAAAA SOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDD |
cinhtay chapter 1 . 10/25/2019 I like it until you describe voldemort vistory, it was quick and boring you know... But thats perception and um i think you make a great job |
jamitized chapter 1 . 10/24/2019 what have i just read- intense. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 Holy shit that was dark |