This has actually hooked me, I'm liking it a lot

I always wondered how anyone could actually buy a membership in-game, it always seemed so.. hostile. This is downright unsettling.

Wow. That's - actually nightmarish. Horrific concept, I got chills up my spine with the assumption that her grandpa experienced the same thing and even asked the same question of Mayor Lewis.

you did good in portraying Morris as the disgusting roach he is

Ooo dead crops and only Hazel can see? I love this interesting mystery - the air of a weird somewhat creepy town where no one really notices anything is cool

Lovely! very neat how you feature two POVs

I love this! The wizard is my favorite character and I wish you could marry him without modding

Love the backstory you're weaving!

This is seriously good!

Delightfully creepy :)

Yeah, I'm hooked

Now this is an unusual and cool direction for a SW fanfic!

It's hilarious that ol Ras is low-key freaking out over Hazel, who doesn't even know she's done something :)

I love the premonition and mystery you have going here!

Delightful story! It’ll be interesting to see where it goes if you continue it.
The suspense is probably my favorite things about it so far.