| Reviews for Take back eternity |
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   toomuchtosay31 chapter 11 . 7/4 Still waiting |
| Frozen teen chapter 11 . 4/26 It’s probably pretty hard to write books about genius characters, my advise is to use mystery books for some of the cases L or Harry might solve your in your fanfic as well as looking up a good crime tv show and picking some of the better episodes. After watching an entire episode you can arrange it so it makes him appear smarter while not diminishing the other people working on the case and marking it too easy to solve. |
| Frozen teen chapter 11 . 4/26 Does he have an eidetic memory? It might help If he did. Also what’s his quirk going to be? I kinda want to see him win against L at something. Maybe chess, Shogi, or go? It would be cool if he befriended Matt Mello and near, maybe something more? Close as brothers or a romantic relationship? |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/10 Update soon? |
| Chrizzy-chan chapter 11 . 1/4 I am so glad I found your story! I can see that you got inspired by Changeling but it got its own twists and plot to it. I love that you picked a similar scenario and made it your own - especially since Changeling is likely never going to get finished :) Thank you for your time and effort! |
| Betta186 chapter 11 . 9/20/2019 I'm curious :) |
| Gabrielle chapter 11 . 9/15/2019 I love the chapter! |
| Dii0girl chapter 11 . 9/15/2019 How mysterious... a secret group...Great story! Thank you for updating again! Its sad when people don't finish their stories. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/14/2019 Isn't this genre getting a bit too old? Poor abused to hell Harry and shit? Write something creative dude. Not some cliched shit |
| ellainaparker chapter 11 . 9/14/2019 great chapter |
| DDarklolita chapter 10 . 8/31/2019 Wow i need more u got me |
| Betta186 chapter 10 . 7/31/2019 Damn, that was intense |
| Ghostisreading chapter 10 . 7/29/2019 I love this so much! I can't wait for more! |
| Gabrielle chapter 10 . 7/15/2019 Love the story! |
| Guest27 chapter 10 . 7/13/2019 Love it! I hope Harry scores high on his test, and is mentally mature enough to handle the pressure of it. |
