I screamed at the end it's so amazing

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Holly shit this is the best one
Love this soooooooooo much Holly fuck this is beautiful

bit of a hasty ending but a great story none the less

Hello!
Unfortunately I‘m not that good at reviews, but I wanted to tell you that I really liked your story. I hope you’re happy with how it turned out as well, have a good day (or evening?).

- Saphira

I needed this T-T I didn't mean to but I really wanted to get that trophy for killing Connor in every chapter so I did and then Hank killed himself in the end and I was like noooo! I just turned deviant for u and I can't stop your suicide? The trophy didn't feel so good after T-T This alternative fanfic ending needs to be canon. Hank is too pure to kill

Haha, I love the "Oh, fuck the mission!" part! I love it when authors make Connor swear, it makes him more human. Great job on this fic. :D

Oh wow, thank you so much for fixing this scene for us! I could not stand the original one, it was so horrible to watch and hear... But this is just amazing! Thank you so much for writing something that mends my broken heart again!

That was awesome! I loved it!

A really well written, if not to short, piece that could have been in the game

I had wondered why Hank killing himself wouldn't make Conner Deviant, I guess that wasn't a line they were going to pursue? Nice work!

AAHh, You fixed it! i had to see that part to get all the tropies you know and i stood outside Hank's house for like five minutes cuz i knew what would happen. (though there are some tasty drama scenes when you decided to remain a machine, the suicide is not one of them)

Thanks for writing this.

Great fic!

I cried so much when i saw this ending and when Sumo started barking it broke my heart. I am glad you wrote this. I would loved to have option to save Hank it that scene. Thank you for sharing :)

GOOD SHIT
I think I almost cried when I first saw that scene. It tore me up inside. This is a good addition to my personally curated collection entitled Denial In Detroit lmao.

This was short but sweet.