You know, I like both versions, but I like this original better because I think the characters are interesting together. I think you should continue to continue both versions.

I think Mordred's seal was supposed to go off too since it's kind of an automatic yes.

Please continue both versions.

I say do both continue us but put a rewrite as a separate story because it’s interesting to see Ramses Gilgamesh enkidu Heracles Merlin male Arthur and of granddad King Hassan working together with jeanne

My suggestion for archer of red, if you're going for a good story you might need to add something new not something already exists. For example a new servant.

Archer - Drona

ALSO KNOWN AS:The Avatar of Brihaspati
Royal teacher of kauravas and pandavas
Third incarnation of lord Bhrama
CHARACTER TYPE: Servant, Human
GENERAL INFORMATION
ADDRESSES SELF AS:Watashi (私?)[1]
FAMILY MEMBERS
FATHER: Sage Bharadwaja
MOTHER: Apsaras Ghritachi
Spouse: Kripi
Son: Ashwatthama

SERVANT STATS
TRUE NAME: Drona
TYPE:Heroic Spirit
SOURCE:Mahabharata[1][2]
REGION:India[1][2]
ALIGNMENT:Lawful Neutral[1][2]
HIDDEN ATTRIBUTE:Heaven[1][2]
ARMAMENTS:Bow, Arrows and Sword

QUALIFIED SERVANT CLASSES
Saber
Archer
Lancer
Rider

PARAMETER
STRENGTH:A
ENDURANCE:A
AGILITY:A
MANA:A
LUCK:A
NP:EX

CLASS SKILLS
Independent Action: A
Magic Resistance: B
Divinity: A

PERSONAL SKILLS
Clairvoyance :A
Dhanurveda : EX
Mana Burst: A
Riding: A

. NOBLE PHANTASM
Agney astra Anti-Army. A
Raura astra. Anti-Country. A
Bhrama Asi. Anti-Demon. A
Narayan Astra. Anti-Divine. A
Bhramandastra. Anti-world. EX

Profile
Identity
Archer's True Name is Drona or Droṇāchārya or Guru Droṇa or Rajaguru Devadroṇa was the 3rd incarnation of Brahma and was royal preceptor to the Kauravas and Pandavas; an avatar of Brihaspati. He was a friend of Guru Sukracharya, the guru of Asuras, including Mahabali. He was the son of rishi Bharadwaja and a descendant of sage Angirasa. He was a master of advanced military arts, including the divine weapons or taught the 100 princes of kauravas clan and the 5 pandavas. He is the Second Commander-in-chief of the great kauravas army during mahabharat war. He was killed by treachery.

Legend
The story of Droṇa's birth is narrated in the Mahabharata. Bharadwaja rishi went with his companions to the Ganga River to perform his ablutions. There he was beheld by the beauty of a beautiful apsara called Ghritachi who had come there to bathe. The sage was overcome by desire, which caused him to produce semen involuntarily out of the visual excitation. Bharadwaja rishi captured this semen in a vessel called a Droṇa, and Droṇācharya himself sprang from the semen thus preserved.

Drona approached Parasurama when he learnt the sage was giving away his possessions to brahmins. However, by the time he was approached by Drona, Parasurama only had his weapons left to give away. He offered to give Droṇa the weapons as well as the knowledge of how to use them. This is how Droṇa obtained the greatest weapons in his possession, and also his title of 'ācārya'.[4]

Of all the Kaurava and Pandava brothers training under Drona, Arjuna emerged as the most dedicated, hard-working and most naturally talented of them all, exceeding even Drona's own son Ashwatthama. Arjuna assiduously served his teacher, who was greatly impressed by his devoted pupil. Arjuna surpassed Drona's expectations in numerous challenges.[7] As a reward, Drona gave Arjuna mantras to invoke the super-powerful divine weapon of Brahma known as Brahmāstra, but told Arjuna not to use this invincible weapon against any ordinary warrior.

When Arjuna, inspired by his brother Bhima's nocturnal eating, mastered archery in absolute darkness, Drona was moved. Drona was greatly impressed by Arjuna's concentration, determination, and drive, and promised him that he would become the greatest archer on earth. Drona gave Arjuna special knowledge of the divine Astras.[citation needed]

Drona was partial especially to Arjuna and Ashwatthama. Drona dearly loved his son Ashwatthama and as a guru, he loved Arjuna more than anyone.
Ekalavya was the son of a Nishadha chief, who came to Dronacharya for instruction. Dronacharya refused to train him along with the kṣatriya princes because Ekalavya was not a kṣatriya prince. Ekalavya began study and practice by himself, having fashioned a clay image of Dronacharya. Solely by his determination, Ekalavya became a warrior of exceptional prowess.

One day, kuru princes' dog's barking disturbed a focused Ekalavya. Without looking, Ekalavya fired arrows that sealed up the dog's mouth without spilling any blood of dog or causing any injury to the dog. The Kuru princes saw this dog running back to them, and wondered who could have done such a feat. They saw Ekalavya, who announced himself as a pupil of Drona. Every person saw his skill in shutting the dog's mouth. But Drona had given promise that Arjun will be the greatest archer ever in the world,so he demanded Ekalavya his right hand thumb as fee of being teacher

In the war Drona was invincible. Unable to defeat him in a fair fight the pandavas plotted against him. In the 15th day of war, the eldest pandavas yudhishthir told Drona a lie saying his son Ashwatthama was killed. Drona believeing yudhishthir would never say a lie dropped his weapons and decided not to live in a world where his son is not present and used the yogic way of suicide. The prince of pancham Dhristdyumana beheaded Drona from behind

PERSONALITY
Drona is a brave and loyal man, but has superiority complex because of his high caste

ABILITIES AND NOBLE PHANTASM

As appropriate for the name of the Archer Class, Drona is an expert of the bow who holds a longbow. Drona's main weapon is his Divine bow, "Narayanastra", One of the six unstoppable divine weapons of the indian mythology granted by one of the Trimurti, the god of preservation Vishnu. Upon activation the weapon would launch an arrow in the sky. Depending upon the strength and no. Of the enemies, the weapon would split and transform into a weapon capable of destroying the target. The power of the attack would increase in proportion to the resistance of the enemy. The weapon would not stop its until the target is destroyed. The only way of stopping the weapon is to offer complete surrender to the weapon and its user or else it will chase the target to the ends of three worlds.

Agney astra is a divine arrow of Drona given to him by the flame god Agni. It would emit inextinguishable flames and can burn down millions of enemies to ashes. It can be extinguished only by water containing the power of varuna, the water god.

Raudra astra is a divine arrow given by the god of destruction Lord shiva. It is capable of razing entire landscapes and even turn celestial beings into complete ashes.

Bhrama Asi is the legendary flaming sword of Drona.
According to hindu mythology it is the first weapon to be created in the universe by the god of creation Bhrama and is the primordial source of energy of all weapons in existence created for the gods to kill evil asuras. It contains the power of bhramastra and gives absolute victory to its weilder.

Bhramandastra is the supreme weapon created by the god of creation Bhrama and most powerful weapon in hindu mythology. This weapon is said to possess the power to destroy the Universe or Brahmand (the 14 realms) according to Hindu cosmology. As recorded in Hindu puranas, when this weapon is invoked it will cause " the oceans to boil due to its heat and earth and mountains will float on the air and everything will burn without even leaving ashes". When this weapon is used for defensive purpose or counter to Brahmastra and Brahmashirsha astra it will swallow the above said astras and neutralize it. When this astra is used for offensive purpose nothing can stop or escape from it.

the weapon was created by lord Bhrama to counter any weapon ever created, even that of Trimurti's. The rishi of this weapon is Para Brahman. It is said to be the most difficult astra to obtain. Capable of destroying entire multiverse in a blink of an eye. Vishvamitra used all kinds of divine weapons against sage Vashistha including pashupatastra , but the Brahmanda astra of Vashistha neutralized and swallowed all astra (weapon) of Vishwamitra proving that Brahma-dhanda astra is the most powerful of all astra's.

"I can sense the danger and the chaos"
This sentence describes what I felt when I read this hahahahahahahaha

Can there Arjuna be in the story? Ever since the Lostbelt 4 and the animation update for Rama, Arjuna and Karna, I thought it would be cool to see more story on the rivalry between Arjuna and Karna. And Arjuna's attack animation look pretty elegant while Karna looks destructive.

Black Faction:

Saber: Lancelot

Lancer: ARTORIA LANCER

Archer: CG EMIYA

Rider: MEDUSA/ALEXANDER

Caster: IRISVIEL

Assassin: KIRITSUGU EMIYA

Berserker: CU CHULAIN
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Red Faction:

Saber: Mordred

Lancer: Zeus

Archer: Goddess Orion

Rider: ARCHILES

Caster: SOLOMON

Assassin: SEMIRAMIS

Berserker: HERACLES

no no no reescribas

Keep Mordred and Atalanta

Well I think caster of black should be Charles Babbage because his hecter Skelton can actually pose a serious threat to other servants. He himself can go toe to toe with servants on the caliber of the knight classes because of his mechanized armor skill.

im both excited and scared at the thought of a rewrite, excited bc this is such a great concept, and scared that bc no character is the same that maybe my faves dont make it sdnfdm

Id love to hear abt the cast and talk abt this btw! idk if this review counts as pm’ing you tho but yes i would very much love to chat abt this

Also, suggestion as a name for jeanne’s faction: Ruler Republic. They can wear costumes that look like team rocket’s. Except they wont, but its a funny thing to imagine lol

Definitely keep mordred

Lol, Gilgamesh is in vacation mode with a doze of "meh, why not?"

I really hope you're ok Author. Because I want to see more if this story!