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Natters chapter 1 . 10/15/2019 Good fic, had me worried at the start though! Phew! |
MetalKyria chapter 1 . 7/18/2018 Thank you for this , I've read it before but forgot to leave a review. So I reread and started to cry bc it was so sad. but it was just a night mare,so we're good,just a night mare all is good .. hahaha sometimes it's good with short memory. |
Bicii chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 Lucky us, More fluffy is coming! As always lot of feels in your writing! I think it’s your super power ;) |
musiqueismyjam1041 chapter 1 . 6/25/2018 Thank gods for that ending! That story was getting way too angsty, but the ending was beautiful. |
SusanB95 chapter 1 . 6/22/2018 I was so relieved when you revealed Walter was dreaming. Before then I was thinking no way is this how things would turn out. Like you wrote, Scorpion will "always come back together." Even though we won't see how on television, we will through Fan Fiction thanks to fabulous writers like you! Try to think about how so many episodes left you smiling and loving this show. In my mind the team will get back to where they were at in the Seaon 4 Valentines episode, only smarter, stronger, and more committed than before. This image has superceded the ending of Season 4 in my mind and has helped me process my grief over the cancellation. Hang in there and know how much your stories are appreciated! |
Rainbow Stevie chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 I know what you mean about it getting worse. If time isn't working then I think the only fix is for another super-fandom to capture your heart. I personally have refused to entertain any options yet, so if you're like me then that may be difficult, but maybe more time will help. But as for the fic, thank you for translating my general state into a story. I've been having a tendency to spin out into those worst-case-scenario endings lately (the last line of part 1 in particular KILLS ME in the best way), and they can take over your brain if you don't play a trump card against yourself. I'm just glad that "ta-da! what if it was just a dream and actually everything is ok" still works. |
WriterFreak001 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Aw thanks for this. I really loved it! I'm glad the ending softened the blow for the beginning angst. Keep writing. :) (I hope to get the next chapter of SOMETHING I write for Scorpion sometime this week or so). |
Bna1001 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Oh yikes you almost had me. Especially when you said Centipede demised too. Glad it was just a nightmare that seemed highly relatable. The FFN stories are the ones helping me cope and I'm glad you're providing. |
heleenscorpion chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 You got me spooked for a minute. But it turns out okay. I just wished we had a Waige wedding and baby's and all. Thinking about that it hurts. Thank you for writing this. At least we can fantasize right? |
Joan123 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Oh boy, you almost got me there! I'm so glad they have left the bad in the past and that they are looking to the future. I know what you mean by the depression. I'm still waiting for the day when I wake up to find that it hurts less. |
dcd28 chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 Seems like there are more than a few fans who have expressed they simply don’t want or just can’t bring themselves to watch past episodes of Scorpion right now. I’m one of them. I have all 4 seasons on Amazon video, but just can’t watch right now. Most everything I have access to on TV right now seems like crap. I rate my enjoyment of watching anything to what I used to feel when a new episode of Scorpion came on. I check my email multiple times a day for notification about Scotpion FanFics from my fav writers. These stories really do help...give me a sense of hope that these characters can live on in writers’ imaginations, on these FanFic pages & in our hearts! These wonderful characters mean so much to so many of us. Thank you for being such a wonderful writer & thanks for sharing your stories! I truly appreciate them...each & every chapter of each & every story! |
ScorplinginTraining chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 I've started writing a funny story, because I've always used humor to cope. But it's interesting how the angst is still kind of an undertone in the chapters I've written. And I've got an angsty one shot brewing I can't get out of my head that I may have to write before I can finish the funny one. I haven't rewatched any of Season 4 since the announcement. I can't yet. I'm still too mad/sad. There will be a review in here somewhere, I promise! :-) I hate that you feel worse about the cancellation, but your fluff is helping me cope and imagine a very different kind of ending for characters I've grown to know and love like family. You imagine them and write them just the way I see them, so I can easily make this canon in my head. The dream hurt, but I'm glad Walter decided to be honest about it. They are improving. And the idea hurt Paige too. Neither wants that future so the story gives us hope they will work harder to hold it together to prevent that outcome. And the best part was Paige's hint about wanting to get married some day and Walter's reaction to it! Loved it! |
Northangerescapee chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 Thank you ! I needed that much sugar this morning. I'm like you… Reality is sinking in and I'm going to miss this show so much… |
pamz chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 Glad it was just a nightmare, but a nightmare that could have easily happened. This was sweet yet sad. Sad yet sweet? Either way, I like it. I'm waiting until Season 4 comes out on DVD before re-watching. But first, I'm going to re-watch all my other favorite series I have on DVD. All of which had just as unsatisfying sucky endings as Scorpion, all with no HEAs and no closure. |
Franxine bobo chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 That was so sweet that I got a tooth ache but it made me smile just keep these stories going we the fans of scorpion really like all the writers have made us feel special with all these wonderful stories thank you |