Love it! Can't wait for the rewrite! Thanks for the great story

im not hating or anything but I just want to say this...what is with people making Naruto neglected or abused or both everytime he has a sibling and parents? I mean come on, give naruto a break.

nooooooooo! it was getting to the good part

Nice

Just please don't go overboard on the rewrite.

Wow! How did I not found this out earlier, this is so good. Oh and, will you still continue this?

genial

why this seemed to be just fine I liked it abyway

Awww

Harry Puta?

I hope this shit doesn't have incest, like many other neglect have.

I doubt you'll ever rewrite it or continue it. Many people here on fabrication doesn't when they say they aren't abandoning the story, but just discontinuing it. If you do, with half a year, I may take back what I said and apologize.

You know Sous I just realized something. If Naruto is in fact a Level 10 Uzumaki sealing master then can't he just create some seals that block the Uchiha clans Doujutsu? Like inscribing seals on contact lenses or something that causes a kind of Mirror effect on them or a special Yin Block seal since the Uchiha clans eyes are heavily Yin based?

It looks to me like you've killed off Karin harsh man, harsh.

I feel the need to ask, before this chapter you'd been calling Sasuke's older Twin "Sayuri" and in this chapter you called her "Satsuki", what's the deal? Also don't you think we have enough Neglect fics on this site? Why not create a story that has Kushina actually being a mother and teaching Naruto?