Beautiful. Spectacular. Amazing. Extrodinary. I've never read a better lemon fic, especially containing my favorite ship of this era. This was honestly a godsend of fics in a sea full of them. But honestly, amazing work!

This was perfect and cute

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Oooh this was good! I have a question though; Did Tobirama set up the whole situation with the seal and turning into a child version of himselff, in an attempt to get closer to Madara (this includes the memory loss, not recognising Hashirama, Mito and Touka's chakra signatures, etc.)?
I ask because he mentions to Madara that he's kind of disappointed that his younger self got to kiss Madara first, and at the mention of this I was like 'Huh?...'.

P.S. on your first yaoi lemon, I think you did really well!

AAAAAAAA SO GOOD! THIS WAS LIKE A DREAM COME TRUE FIC!
still crying im so gonna reread this till death