Awww, man! This is awesome! Stefano searching his next victim for his project of art and to find Sebastian is the perfect candidate, is my pleasure. I remember how Valentini haunted you in the game, with his photographs of grotesque murder in a surreal way. Obscura fighting you to stop you to succed... thatthing intrigues me too much! Wonderful! And about ex detective Castellanos, I always thought about this second STEM to be a some kind of hell for him to face is own demons, it reminds me some kind of Dante's Inferno: To find redemption, he must face his fears and failures to save his family, even if it means to die if is necessary, but like he said in the game with nurse Tatiana "Dying is not an option".
I would like to see a second chapter one day, really, really I enjoy seeing more adventures from different situations from this game. I love both games About a past haunting once a great KCPD detective to tear apart his life for all the doubtful decisions for not believing his wife about his lost child... Now he must face the consecuence of that mistake and the same time to redeem himself, but it will be a difficult task, a evil within is waiting inside STEM and won't stop nothing to prevent him to succeed to save the one who thought lost forever...
Beautiful, very beautiful. Please, my friend. If one day return your inspiration with this story, please continue, I am one fan of your for this.
Once again, congratulations! X3

I loved the writing! This fandom does not have much stories... I understand your Stefano x Sebastian ship, because I, too, shipped them from the beginning (if only he had more cutscenes in the game). You write very poetically and it is beautiful, I love reading your lines over and over again because of that! Please write more chapters (:

I very much enjoyed this story so far and I really hope you decide to finish it! It’s been a whole month!

Yeah, you really shouldn't step into a terriority like this because nothing good can come out of it. I mean seriously there has to be a more interesting idea then this. Did you honestly run out of ideas or something like that you had to desperately stretch your arm to reach down into the bottom of the barrel? Don't get me wrong that your writing is great and really captures the really dark and sadistic nature of The Evil Within but the tools are only as good as the narrative it's written on. You're also breaking character just to satify your urges. Don't you have any respect for the franchise?