All of these character changes and side stories from the series are getting really old. Please come up with something original. I am literally just flashing through these, like I did in the series, because I could not care any less about them. The only things different are which characters are involved and how those different characters interact. It really feels like you are making your own filler which was a terrible idea then, and a terrible one now.

kudos for sneaking that line from lord of the rings love it

uh dude its a MONTH not 2 weeks

fantastic chapter I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next

omg i didnt expect to find this story again
ah my favourite childhood

Didn’t think it was going to lead up to this. I eagerly await the next chapter

I cried at the end of ch 14, I see the avatar inspiration and I love it

I want to like this. I want to keep reading it. But God if it doesn't hurt my fucking eyes to keep reading this book report. the way you write is atrocious.

Honestly, I would bet good money that Hashirama's Sage Mode is Forest Sage Mode. We never get a real answer for just what having Mokuton naturally along with being another incarnation of ashura means. All we really get is he was awesome and tenzo's use of Mokuton doesn't come close. It's entirely possible that he had such a strong connection to nature due to his Mokuton that he probably could sense nature energy without being trained and be protected by his Mokuton while he learned to harness it without turning into stone. Of course this is just what I would call an educated guess at best so take it how you will.

me gusto espero el proximo

Seriously, you way overpowered Kakuzu and Hidan, they would not have been able to take on both Han and Yugito. Also, only Jinchūriki can survive a direct Bijūdama. That, and people who have some sort of getaway, dodge, or deflect ability.

I still don't know why you made the Raven blind considering that definitely didn't happen in Canon, in fact Itachi destroyed the Raven with Amaterasu in Canon so that the eye would never fall into the wrong hands.

espero el proximo

The Reverse Tetragram Seal doesn't destroy the body, it has to have something to seal everything in, after all.

I agree about the Madara thing, but Danzo would have been a better character if he wasn't so damn stupid(Seriously, he leaked Naruto's Jinchūriki Status, he caused the Villagers to discriminate against the Uchiha, he forged the order for the Uchiha Massacre after being the one to allow it to get to that point by killing Shisui, he's even the reason for Nagato becoming Pain) and if he didn't have delusions of grandeur, especially ones about everything he did being for the village. Anyway, the fact that you cried more for Danzo than Jiraiya is horrible and you should be ashamed.