I have followed this story for quite a while now and must say, that I really like it. I enjoy, that the story is similar to the original treasure island but still has its own elements and that the main focus is laied on the relatio ship between the charakters, especially between Jim and the doctor. Good job, please continue the story!

I loveee this story so much, please, tell me that you'll write the sequel ?

YES! Omg I'm so happy that you have continued writing this story. I amit that I was actually worried that you won't continue it since the incident about the knife was over. Please continue writing it! I really likehow the characters personalities fit to those in the original book and are not too "over the top".
I'm so exited for the part on the island! Finally a good TI fanfiction! Congratulations, you have your first fangirl (at least for this story).

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I really love this story, please continue writing it. I think Treasure Island is such a good book (my favourite book) and there is not a lot of fanfic about it. I love how you describe the characters, and I think their actions really fit to the original characters in Stevensons book. I especially like that you concentrate on the relationship between Jim and the doctor and not only on Jim and Silver (like in most of the other fanfiction). So do me a favour and pleeeaaase continue writing this story.

Interesting chapter, if only Jim can manage to stay out of trouble, but I have a feeling something is going to happen... By the way, very fond of the authentic naval setting, good job for keeping it in the original books era. Good writing!

What an interesting concept, Id love to read more! Ive always thought that Jim needed a mentor-like figure, and often wondered why the doctor didn't step in, so I'm glad to have found this story. Your writing is very pleasant to read, a good mix of conversation and description, so please update!