| Reviews for The mind melt |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/29 I really liked it, because I think it showed the real relationship of Tony and Peter, even though it was a bit dramatic everyone needs a little drama right . But it was good so well done |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2019 Noice. Good job. |
 HorrorFan13 chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 That was really good |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 Lol, I love how May was like ‘imma leave him here the Avengers ‘cause their capable and nothig’s gonna happen to him. Peter preceded to escape and nearly die again. Anyway, great job, I loved this! |
| All Things Animated chapter 1 . 5/8/2019 Aww! Good job! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 It was a great story! I love it! |
| LehnsherrWasRight chapter 1 . 3/23/2019 Yeah! "the little tyke" was no problem. An angel. Y'know, an angel who played super-hero with a foggy brain and end-up beaten up, almost died twice... But outta that? Oh he's FINE! Loved this! But it's not explained where the fever came from, or did I miss it? |
| SuicidalPony1234 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019 This is amazing! |
| Beachgirl25 chapter 1 . 1/24/2019 Awesome! |
| The Nerd Beyond chapter 1 . 12/3/2018 Iiiiiiiiiiii need another chapter or 80. |
| J chapter 1 . 10/29/2018 Grade A AWESOME! |
| SongNoFound chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 Gooooood fiction ! |
| JohnnyCade4EVR chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 Hello there friend! I love your stories! One thing that I notice though (and I wanted to comment on this one because you did say this one took long and you didn't really edit) is that there are some consistent grammar mistakes in them. Just little things that grammar nerds like me pick up on, but I was thinking (if you're interested) since I love your fics and I love editing, I could be sort of your beta/editor? Not trying to drag, just an offer :) |
| FanGirl898 chapter 1 . 8/9/2018 Lovely story are you going to do another chapter? |
| simpleguy24 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 So good |
