Why are the last few chapters all in bold type? It's painful to try to read all bold. I can't do it anymore. You do realize that bold is considered to be the equivalent of shouting in writing.

oh no, did Harry die?

This was so beautiful. I loved it!

What a clever pet, Hedwig is. I really want to got an owl because of her.
And this story is so intriguing! there are a bit too much details and the plot is a bit slow, but it's got a feel and nice mysteries.

I'm suspicious Dora actually knew about the magic or something, and it's not a coincidence Harry's adopted family share a name with his mother's maiden name, right?

I hate how dumbledore is always withholding info and manipulating ppl like that! What gives him the right to decide whether or not to share evidence of Harry's continued existence?!

This sounds alot like heroes of olympus with the percy/jason losing their memories. I like the mysteriousness of it though.

huh... what a strange and abrupt ending. I like the story, though. Very much an action plot, not much else, but well done as is.

Liked it. Especially the part Sirius kills Harry. It was really touching.

please continue your a great writer.

Are Nora and Rick, Bellatrix and Rudolphus?

that was so awsome and well i loved it so much especialy harry being in america with no diea as to who he is. and well bella being doria explains the temperment but who was her husband? rudolphus?

This chapter was great, couple of typos here and there but nothing unusually annoying about grammar or flow. Finally getting some action!

Are you going to continue with this story? it is really good and i would soo read more of this story!

oh lord...I AM ALMOST CRYING! I never cry at fanfiction! Poor Sirius...oh the guilt he is going to feel...so sad. Wonderful chapter. You write all the characters beautifuly (as beautiful as a death eater can get)

About half way through the first two paragraphs, I went 'AH! NOT THAT BELLA WITCH!" :) Good job stirring emotions!