why do they never notice loki's eye color change?

God bless you, Lodestar, your fanfics never cease to amaze me. Another precious pearl to reread and reread and reread...Love your stories!

Wonderful plot and loveable characters; a few problems with grammar and some incorrect homophones (understandable!). Overall, impressive, would love to see sequels.

Love cranberries, have to hurry to next chapter though this is great by the way.

Hooray!
I actually kinda wish Marvel took this kind of approach with the movies, because it's really satisfying to see this type of ending. Really makes me happy :)
Also, I saw that you posted a sequel on The Weeping Siren on March 21st, right? I was wondering when you might update to the second chapter, because the Weeping Siren is honestly one of my favorite stories that you've posted here on this account, so I'm really excited about this sequel. I'm sure that it's gonna be great :D
And even if it's not, I'll still love it. I realize I may have said this before, but your writing skills are GREAT!(Please forgive me on my lack of vocabulary, I don't really pay attention in class lol) No but in all seriousness, I really hope you become an author one day, because I have no doubt that you'll become SUPER successful.
Really excited for you updates :)
Have a nice day/afternoon/night

Hey, I loved the team-bonding moment near the end. They have so many flaws, and it makes them even more awesome. Good job.

The food problem. If he hasn't been eating, Natasha should have known to have Bruce hook him up to an IV or t least gave him Electrolyte juice, Popsicle, or something. I know asgardians are not the same a humans, but the physiology cannot be so drastically different that he can go for several months without food. especially with the information he was trying to give bruce. Maybe I missed something, but if not, he would have to be given nutrients soon or else he won't survive.

Why did I not find this sooner? I love the part with the sleep-control- that’s really interesting. Good job.

An interesting story.
I quite enjoyed it overall, there are some really neat aspects being explored and brought up; interesting things to think about and curious possibilities.
The one thing that is a bit sad really is the change in pacing. I loved the time the story took in the beginning; really establishing the events, focusing on the characters perspective, little details and keeping everything tied together; whereas near the end the pacing picked up so much that it felt rushed in comparison; those little things I had begun to appreciate lost on the side.
Even now at the end, there are questions left unanswered.
Still, I did enjoy the story for what it was. Thank you for sharing it.

That was such a good fanfic! I wish I had read it sooner

The plot of this story annoys me so much :/ I loved the idea of blind!loki, but every character in your story is an irrational, immature and irresponsible jerk. You want to tell me they didn't feed Loki on Raft for a whole bloody month? Is it Korea or America, for God's sake? I would have bought it if you were describing Third World, not a place where human rights are the most important thing. Loki - criminal or not - wasn't sentenced to death by starvation :/ Additionally, his death could have started intergalactic war. Seriously nobody thought what Odin would do? And I would rather belive in cuddly Hulk than in Banner or THOR not insisting on getting medical help IMMEDIATELY, no matter what SHIELD says. Brain swelling can be fatal. The fact Loki lost his sight was enough to suspect there may be others complications and health risks. And yeah, leave the man who clearly suffers just like that in a cell with broken glass everywhere. What a retarded characters... :/ Sorry, but I'm so mad a this I can't stop ranting :/

excellent

nice

very good

good