- Azazel married to Alter Lancer Artoria and having a son with her? Interesting.
- I can tell that Rias's reaction to the news is going to be amusing.

On a personal level I have a problem with you forcing Salter into a relationship, especially with azazel of all people.

On a much more objective level the writing leaves much to be desired. It's far too informal in style and grammar and this goes for your other stories too. I won't mention the spelling because those mistakes slip past everybody. That being said the story also doesn't seem to have any substance and doesn't have much value in entertainment or just in general.

Maybe in the future this story can become much greater but your style of writing alongside the cliches without any elaboration don't allow the story to either stand out or give anyone reasons to like it

Three sibling humping each other is so wrong in so many level yet... Why do i feel ...aroused by that very thought

Keep up the good work

so does this mean everyone and I mean EVERYONE meaning the entire male cast got genderbend...kinky

Great story! Looking forward to future chapters

Good job on the start

Pretty cool story so far i liked how you introduced all the characters i cant wait for the next chapter

Hmmm... I'm hoping that there won't be any bashing in this fic and I'm kinda sad that Asia is at least for now dead. But overall I'm very interested in this fic.

Nice story, can't wait for more updates