... so definitely before the massacre.

Nice chapter

I am still alive, been reading an old series that I am fond of and that has taken me away from Fanfiction for a brief time. Now to the chapter, I find myself bot repulsed and impressed by Danzo. On the one hand here he is attempting to claim a servant for his own in the midst of this awful situation, one in which he played a major part in bringing about. It strikes as both greedy and beyond opportunistic, he has essentially helped spur on this night's actions which will cause the deaths of hundreds of his villages citizens. And yet, I admire his ability to look for advantages, in an attempt to salvage the situation, and gain something that might help balance the scales this awful night. That said I would not trust Danzo with a servant.
As for Hakuno, I have rather enjoyed seeing him do so well in this chapter. One of the biggest questions I have right now, is what exactly are demons and angels your story? You mention that demons are mortal, does that mean angels are also mortal? Or are only the demons that Vitch found in Naruto's world mortal? Many questions there. As for his combat, well he is holding his own, and he is proving to be an excellent warrior, but honestly I am most impressed by his ability to keep calm-ish in this situation. More than his power, which is both impressive and cool, I think his ability to keep a level head is what makes him so effective. The addition of two of Shuten - Doji's oni as part of Vitch's forces was completely unexpected. I sense a story there. Looking forward to that one. His reaction to Tamamo being captured by Vitch's NP was spot on, and I get the sense that his fight with Celtchar is going to get a lot more violent, in probably one of the worst areas, a large inhabited city.
As bad as the Uchiha massacre was in cannon, this night is worse on every level. I believe that the village will lay the blame for the massacre at the hands of the demons and Vitch, they might claim that Itatchi worked alongside the demons to tie the story together nicely, though that would likely make things worse in the public eye. That a powerful and respected ninja betrayed them and sold their home out to demons would utterly ruin any sense of security they may have. The Leaf village is really getting hit hard here, honestly it reminds me a bit of the Pain arc, one of my favorite arcs before I quit following the series.
Now for one of the oddest elements of the chapter. Naruto going out to fight the demons. I can see him making the attempt to do so, but how could a child, though subtly empowered by the fox, stand a chance against seasoned warriors like the demons? I assume the first kill was due to surprise and the demon underestimating Naruto, but the others seems a bit hard to believe. That said his favorite fox familiar was being empowered by Kurama, so that helps to sell that scene. Overall, a child just killed 3 demons, I would hope that his actions will inspire the ninjas to do the same. If he a practically untrained child can do this, then surely they can do the same. Though I find the scene a little unbelievable, I like where you are going with it. Naruto is showing the village what he can do, that he is a good person who is willing to fight and defend his home even as a child. He is starting to write his legend as it were. This will likely have a strong influence on at least a portion of the village as he goes out to help others. Though I have no doubt that some idiots will also misinterpret what is happening.
As for the NP Tamamo is stuck in, it seems that it is a despair NP that forces the victim to relive their nightmares, creating and portraying their fears and bringing them to their knees. An interesting phantasm, though I assume its effect might be lessened if Hakuno can get to Tammamo and help to bring her back to light, so to speak.
Overall, an excellent chapter well worth the weight.

finally after centuries you finally updated this great work.
You know I was afraid that you would abandon it, but I am glad that it was not, since Naruto is one of the best works to expand on his world, and more if we add it with Fate, which adds a plus, I tell you man, It has a lot of subjects to work on, even on the secondary characters that are the ones that give life to the work, and in which I recommend you show more often ok, well that's all I thank you for updating :)

I really hate this kind of plot. Putting other characters in. Just go with the fucking pair

just a note a full nine tailed tamammo is Amaterasu or the two faced gold fox which is (probably) a beast meaning that her power will be similar to the series final boss than naruto's nine tailed fox

It was nice yo see this updated I can't wait to be done with this arc tho

Hehehehehehe I know most of the characters survive this Arc, but that doesn’t mean finding out what happens in Point B is any less interesting. Truly, Vitch is a Bitch and I guess she survives Olympus if what your saying is any indication.
That aside, the survivors will either get stronger to make sure this never happens again or will be broken by this Trial of Fire.
CHEERS COSMIC! \ . /
Live. Laugh. Repeat.

Average greek god? So horny and spiteful?

Why did I even start following this ?

Hello author, I am glad that there I have rewritten this fantastic story that is in fact my favorite of all that you have, the cap was very good I loved it, maybe I can not give you a super review like, knight of wings, but yes I can suggest some things to you when the story you are writing is advancing further, since I would like to explore some characters from the world of naruto that the author did not develop or put a story on, such as the father of Kakashi or Uzumaki myth, the first hokage's wife

Well I am back to review the latest chapter of one of my favorite ongoing stories. First of all, the buildup has been solid, and I have to say that I have enjoyed it, but now the pay off. I was not expecting Celtchar to have given such good advice to Fugaku. That letter that he wrote might be one of the key factors that helps Sasuke to stay on the right path, instead of diverting like an idiot into a host of avoidable problems. I think my favorite quiet moment of this chapter, what few there were, was when Fugaku wrote out his feelings towards his youngest son. It was well done, the emotion, the regret, the words that would remain unsaid, all of it was perfect for this terrible situation. As far as combat goes, I really enjoyed the sections where we got to see the cursed sword begin to eat at Itatchi's mind and sanity. It was haunting, and very good. That he hates the idea of war so much that he would knowingly commit such an atrocity is hard to believe, but I like the idea of a good man being forced to choose between terrible options. And he still chooses to go about it in a way that will haunt him for years to come. Forced to kill his family, and even his own lover, I see that Itatchi's lot in life has not improved much, maybe Hakuno's appearance provided more time, but still. This night will define him for the rest of his days.
I appreciate you providing more background on the Omagatoki. There is clearly a reason behind Vitch and Scorn committing such events. I am not sure, perhaps a ritual to empower themselves, a declaration of might? Not sure, but I am excited to learn more of the legends that are associated with our resident fox caster. As to what Vitch's phantasm was and does, I am at a loss. Although I have to say that how she got Tamamo's attention was hilariously brilliant. Her protective territorial instincts were very her, and got her into trouble. As to Vitch's motivations, I am guessing that she is trying to become more powerful, possibly even attempting to out do Scorn, though the exact means and reasons I am a bit lost on. As an aspect of Tamamo does she actually desire Hakuno for herself? The thought makes some sense, seeing how Tamamo's love for Hakuno has affected all variations of her forever as we see in FGO, much like Quetz's love for Lucha. If so how would she go about stealing him? And for that matter, can she absorb Tamamo like the caster has done to Shark in the past? So many questions. But it appears that Vitch is a talented enough individual to mess with the cores of other servants, perhaps an ability from her original self?
Like how Kabaiel's master got out, who let him out? And why? Furthermore, as despicable a person as he is, would he attack and help destroy the demons? He is a holyish man after all. Kabaiel is an interesting servant, as he is a good man stuck with a bad master, I can only assume a catalyst was used, as I find it hard to believe that such a repugnant man would be able to contract with even a fallen angel. His NP's seem effective if not costly.
Overall an excellent chapter, I have been waiting for this one for awhile, and it does not disappoint. Thank you for your work, I look forward to reading more of the adventures/misadventures of Hakuno and his young family.

Well, great chapter overall, though I honestly believed you should limit the number of OC from the beginning. Writing a consistent story with too many OCs will be hard, especially near the climax. I just hope you don't get demoralized by some... Colorful reviews yeah they can be incredibly annoying

So, on to my actual review. I am left very wondering about why the heck Guan Yu of all people talk and act like... that. Does this have anything to do with the other Tamamo Nine? I also sensed that Kernelm thought and his hatred toward Hakuno to be extremely guided. Unlike the other OCs, Kernelm's thought pattern struck me as unnatural.

Side note: Totally loved what you did with the Tamamo Nine and Amaterasu, not many authors had the gall and creativity to write them like this

i gotta admit i started reading all of this yesterday and finished up the last 3 chapters up currently today and holy hell having not to seen anything related to fate besides one of the games on the switch this is pretty cool i gotta admit so keep up the great work and i cant wait for the next chapter.

Well I am still alive, just been busy. Anyway the review. The chapter is excellently paced as always, that slow build really works for scenes like this, making us care for both sides of the coup is something that almost never happens, again I express my thanks and my admiration for making Fugaku a likable and effective character, not just a one note character as so many others do. The weight of the coup feels real here, and I am actually sad to see the Uchiha rush into such a foolish mistake, tragic as it might be. Speaking of tragedy, the dwarf's line about his weapon finding a tragic soul was my favorite in the chapter. It was short, foreboding, and it was just perfect. I am curious as to what kind of weapon it is exactly. A greatsword? Shortsword? Arming sword? Not a sword? Regardless its a western weapon, so even without its power it will stick out, so nice touch there.
As for Hakuno and Amaterasu's interaction, does Tamamo know that her inner deity also has a thing for her husband? How does she feel about that? Can she do anything about it? Many questions swirl around that issue, but I do find it funny that all of Tammamo's personalities, even Amaterasu, are in love with Hakuno. Makes me wonder why they haven't attempted to steal him from the original.
But as for Danzo, yeah he's horrible, though I still admire that determination to do what he feels is necessary, though he seems to have twisted his determination into something quite murderous. Unlike Amakusa, who is my favorite character from fate, Danzo is unwilling to look to alternatives, or even question whether or not he is wrong, as we saw with Amakusa going into the field of battle as an incarnated human against supernatural forces beyond compare. There is clearly something fundamentally broken with Danzo, I stopped following Naruto during the assault on the Kage summit, but is there ever given a reason how he came to be this person? What led him to be such a person that he would choose such a path. And continue to walk down it after seeing the price he is paying? Though I suspect that part of why he continues is that he is attempting to make the sacrifices he's paid worth it in the end. I suspect regardless of the version of the instigating events of the Uchiha massacre, there will be consequences for Danzo, sooner or later.
I am surprised that Hakuno recovered so quickly, I thought he would be out of commission for a longer period of time than he was, but it will nice to see him in action again. The character moment with Hakuno and his family was just the lighthearted moment we needed to break up the tension in the rest of the chapter. Now the plans and machinations going on are clearly going to be derailed, and I hope spectacularly, but I am curious as to the source of the derailment. I suspect Hakuno will be a part of it, but then I consider, why is Tamamo Vitch helping the Uchiha, what does she gain from the coup, or the coup's failure? Many questions that I am eager to learn the answer. Well done once again, I look forward to the next chapter.