i love ur story i cant wait to read more

I'm loving the premise you put into this and I do hope you continue it I would hate to see such a unique take on a time travel story with a nice Sasuke and loving Sakura go on unfinished

Awesome. cant wait gor more chapters. and the remake of spear is going well with the chapter i read. .

This is a very interesting story. I hope to see it play out.

more of the precious

You know, I was happy that you had worked around canon instead of completely throwing it out of the window, and Boruto did have the potential to turn evil so I was willing to look past the he's bratty and evil thing which doesn't explain anything...I really did like how you made your pairing work without bashing Sasuke or Hinata or ignoring canon, but you lost me as a reader at the mob beating...its a pity because the fic seemed interesting but I don't read fics containing mob beatings anymore- it's a piece of fanon that is as fictional and baseless as the civilian council and sets off alarms in my head and makes me drop a fic like a hot potato...I hope I haven't offended you but this is how I truly feel.

not bad for a start have to see where you are going before i leave a comment on the story but in response to your author's note at the end of the second chapter the 31 chapter masterpiece might be time braid by shaperV :)

First off I'm replying to your pm through the review board because every time I try to send a message out it always comes up as spam. Secondly I think I need to be the one to apologize. My little rant in the last post was not aimed towards you. It was aimed at all those NaruHina fans out there that has their noses so far up Kishimoto's rear end that they can't tell that we all have been trolled. And I should have word the post differently and for that I am sorry.

Thirdly I understand life is a bitch espically when it involves family. I know I went through the same situation with my brother and his family so I understand completely where you are coming from. And I hope everything works out in the end. Fourth these are your stories so you can tell them how you want to. And you had every right to go off on those guest reviews for the comments that they made.

And lastly this is for all of you guest reviewers that has bashed and flame this story and many others. Man up don't go hiding behind the guest reviews and bash and flame stories because you disagree with the summaries. Create your own account and if you already have one then use it. And have I nice civilized debate with the author on why you disagree with them.

With that out of the way keep up the good work and I am looking foward to the next updates to this story and Tip of the Spear.

I first off I just want to say I love this story it's refreshing and interesting at the same time. With that said the Hinatard remark I find as insulating. Bacause I myself am a NaruHina fan. And I have nothing against NaruSaku or Sakura in general. Infact Sakura is tied with Hinata as my favorite female character in Naruto.

Now with that said am I happy Naruto ended up with Hinata? Yes I am. Would I have been happy if Naruto ended up with Sakura? Yes I would have. I'm I pissed with how Naruto ended? Yes I am. Because every pairing at the end either felt forced or how the fuck did they get together. The only pairing that made since in the end was Shikamaru x Temari. The rest just left you scratching your head wondering how in the hell did they end up together.

But anyways keep up the good work and I am looking foward to the next chapter.

Once again, logical inconsistencies are getting me. You spend both chapters building up the elder Sakura's complete and utter love, devotion, and longing for Naruto only to then have her say that she's sure that she will find someone else to love and care for her. It's not bad in and of itself, it just happened far too quickly.

~Elsil

This was a good beginning, if a little rough around the edges in terms of grammar and logic (why would the 3rd be so trusting of Sakura with so little evidence? Why would Kakashi, if he distrusted and was suspicious of her, allow Sakura to perform an unknown jutsu on him?). With that being said, few Sakura time travel fics have been done, and even fewer done well. I hope that yours continues.

~Elsil

Cool, like it

awesome story though so far. looking forward to the rest

while I may support NaruHina... NaruSaku should have happened... they should have been together from the start and I mean academy start...I don't even like Sasuke... he should have been named a missing nin the second he left the the village for orochimaru... Ok the Receitive Mission was to give Sasuke a chance to come back... but when he ran off on his own... Tsunade should have labeled him a missing nin... would have saved so much pain and heartache for Naruto and Sakura.

Well that was great another cool chapter the little NaruSaku are so cute it's so adorable, Elder Sakura really is a pervert lol, now Sasuke know his future things are getting interesting even having Team Gai wanting to help Naruto was interesting, I do wonder who the love interest will be for the elder Sakura gonna be kinda weird I imagine but whatever. Can't wait for chapter 3 mini NaruSaku are gonna change and that's great now Sakura's gonna stop that accidental kiss as will Sasuke most likely, I wonder what Sakura will do with Ami that little bitch.

I'm glad that Yugao's gonna be important in this story