honestly I wish this went longer

I love this.

This is very good, and yeah, all romances (especially with blake) need their time to develop, pity that this was a one-shot, it was a pretty good base for more.

(Knightshade FTW)

Some grammatical errors but the fic is still very good.

Really fun read, nicely done.

FLY MY PRETTY! lol

please continue, one of the best knightshade fics ive read!

Grandes historias b

you've built a setting of a perfectly good knightshade fic. I'd say keep with it, if you are so inclined

Oh. Why did you end here? More!

It is cute and I agree. She does take a while to warm up to Sun, so anyone else would probably be similar.

I really like knightshade... i hope you can continue this.

you could expand on this and I hope you do, because that was a wonderful read

This is adorable, and I love this ship.

more please, this is very good

I would like to see more of this, I want to see Jaune and Blake getting together, I want Cardin and his team getting punished, and I wanted to see Goodbitch getting what she deserved, I mean seriously from an ex-terrorist a racist bully and who know's what else she picks on Jaune seriously fuck Goodwitch, but this fic does point out something about canon I hated and that is how nobody did anything, it was obvious Jaune was having problems and everyone did nothing, they all just sat there and watch and just let all those bad things happen to Jaune without doing anything, I actually like your Blake a lot more then canon Blake, at least your Blake doesn't come of as, "Unless it involves the White fang I don't care about it." attitude that canon Blake had, so I do hope you continue this even if you did put it as complete.